thắc mắc Xin tư vấn hành văn tiếng Anh - thư xin lỗi vì trễ hẹn giao sản phẩm

RobbieSparrow

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Chả là em có ông khách thuê em vẽ minh họa 1 quyển sách, từ lần gửi bản thảo gần nhất cho đến bây giờ là hơn 1 năm rồi. Lúc đó thật sự chỉ còn vẽ bìa nữa là xong nhưng rồi dịch ập tới, lúm úm cả tỷ chuyện gia đình và công việc cộng với vẫn chưa hài lòng lắm với bản thảo đó nên em cứ dây dưa. Cuối cùng thì cũng có chút thời gian rảnh nên em quyết định vẽ lại từ A-Z luôn rồi gửi ổng 1 lần. Giờ chỉ muốn làm cho thỏa vì đây là dự án lớn đầu tiên và khá quan trọng, ổng ko chịu nữa thì cũng chả sao. Em cũng tính viết 1 bức thư nhận lỗi hơi lâm li tí nhưng vẫn thể hiện mình nghiêm túc muốn hoàn thành tác phẩm một cách tốt nhất, chất lượng thay vì chạy theo tiến độ. Em mắt nhắm mắt mở viết xong cũng 2 giờ sáng, cao nhân nào rảnh ghé qua cho em vài dòng nhận xét với ạ, em đa tạ


Hi John,

Hope you doing well,

First of all, I sincerely apologize for being out of touch for a long time. I've been aware that was totally disrespected and unprofessional to you with that such behavior. As an emerging artist, I was excited but also overwhelmed, confused and bad in time and quality management when working on such a big project like this for the first time.

I'm also aware that you could be not interested in this project after the long wait and don't care checking the attachment anymore, I'm totally fine with it. However, I'm still sending all the finished work to you as a way to say I really love this project and want to keep my words of completing it. This is my first big project so it plays a very important role in my career.

From the last time, my aesthetic sense, insight and style have been changed, improved and I realized that the previous draft wasn't good enough to be published. It took me a really long time for considering before went to the difficult but rational decision: remake everything! These are the changes:

-I've changed the book size from A5 landscape to A5 portrait.

- Redrawing every single picture by brush pen, shading by pencil and painting them with watercolors.

-The drawings have the design composition in pairs (spread) instead of mostly on every single page like before. Nearly 1/3 of the drawings are changed to be more relevant.

-Some drawings having linking content were merged into 1 page, decrease around 10 in the total page.

-I've had another artist helped to design the cover in order to diversify the style and bring the book a fresh look, ended up the result wasn't good, I decided to do it myself.



Hopefully, you can take the time to give it a look and please let me know if you are still interested.

Wish you have a great day

Sincerely,
 
2 đoạn văn đầu viết ngắn thôi, có thành ý là được, viết dài người ta ko đọc hết đâu, mỏi mắt nữa.
Như mình chơi đúng 3 câu cho 2 đoạn đó là được.
Sorry for my belated .... Câu 2 giải thích lý do. Câu 3 xin thông cảm. Rồi xuống cái đoạn trình bày sửa đổi luôn
 
Hi John,

Hope you are doing well,

I’d like to apologize for out of touch for a long time. I understand it is very unprofessional. Problem is I was very much overwhelmed. It was a bad time to me.

You may no longer care however I'm still sending all the finished work to you to say I really love this project. This project starts a new chapter to my career.

I spent nights to consider and make few changes:

- Redrawing and paging
-one third of the drawings are changed to be more relevant
-fresher look

I totally understand if you ignore it . However I hope to hear from you and I hope to have another chance !

Wish you a great day!

Kind Regards,
 
Cảm thấy rất tiếc cho b chủ topic vì lần đầu có một job có vẻ khá tiền và hoàn chỉnh về cấu trúc sáng tạo. Nhưng cũng rất thông cảm cho b John. Bản thân mình đã từng làm đến Mkt Director và may mắn đc chỉ đạo sáng tạo nhiều job lớn. Designer rất hiếm người tôn trọng deadline và duy trì giao tiếp 2 bên. Càng tài năng, dồi dào sức sáng tạo thì càng ko qly đc phần admin trong công việc. Hy vọng John là một người rộng lượng, và hy vọng hơn nữa là anh ta chưa tìm đc ai thay b.
 
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Mình viết lại khá là nhiều phần

Hi John,

Hope you (and your family/business/etc) are doing well,

First of all, I sincerely apologize for being out of touch with you for a long time. I am aware of how disrespectful and unprofessional that was on my part. As an emerging artist, I was excited to work a project of this scale for the first time but also I was overwhelmed, owning to a lack of experience, which led to difficulties in time and quality management.

I also expect that you may simply no longer have any interest in this project, and I understand if you choose to do so. However, I’m still sending all the finished work to you as a way to show my passion for this project, and my commitment to seeing it through, aside from it being a significant landmark in my career.

Since the last time, my aesthetic sense, insight and style have undergone drastic changes, and I realized that the previous drafts weren’t living up to the publishing standards. It took me a considerable amount of time before finally coming to the conclusion that I must start over from scratch! Here are a list of things I have done:

-I’ve changed the book size from A5 landscape to A5 portrait.

-Every single picture have been redrawn and reshaded with brush pens and pencils, and finally painted using watercolors.

-Several drawings with linking content were merged into a single page, and have been shrunk down to around 10 in the total page.

-I had asked for the assistance of a fellow artist in making the cover in order to diversify the style and give the book a fresh look. However, I wasn’t satisfied with the final result so I decided to do it myself.

Hopefully, you can take some time to give the work a look and please let me know if you are still interested in it.

I wish you have a great day.

Sincerely
 
Hi John,

Hope you (and your family/business/etc) are doing well,

First of all, I sincerely apologize for being out of touch for a long time. I am aware of how disrespectful and unprofessional that was on my part. As an emerging artist, I was excited to work on a project of this scale for the first time but also I was overwhelmed, owning to a lack of experience in time and quality management.

I also expect that you may no longer have any interest in this project, and I completely understand. However, I’m still sending all the finished work to you as a way to show my passion for this project, and my commitment to seeing it through as a significant milestone in my career.

Since the last time, my aesthetic sense, insight and style have undergone drastic changes, and I realized that the previous drafts weren’t living up to the publishing standards. It took me a considerable amount of time before finally I decided to start over from scratch! Here were things I had done:

-I had changed the book size from A5 landscape to A5 portrait.

-Every single picture had been redrawn and reshaded with brush pens and pencils, and finally painted using watercolors.

-Several drawings with linking content were merged into a single page, as a result the number of pages were decreased by 10 in total

Hopefully, you can take some time to give my work a look and please let me know if you are still interested in it.

I wish you have a great day.

Sincerely
Mình sửa lại phần lâm li bi đát dựa trên phần sửa của #6 thôi còn thích ngắn gọn thì lấy của #4 nhé :doubt:
 
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