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The number of kilometers traveled by cars in Britain increased from around 1300 to nearly 1400 from 1990 to 1995. From 1995 to 2010, this figure of Britain remained stable at around 1400. Besides, the number of kilometer traveled by cars in US increased from around 1700 to nearly 1900 from 1990 to 2005, before fluctuating and reached at 1800 in 2010

Regarding the number of kilometers traveled by cars in Germany, the figure decreased steadily from 1990 to 2005 at below 1600 before declining to nearly 1400 at 2010. The number of kilometers traveled by cars in Japan stood at nearly 700, but later decreased to around 300 in around 2003, before increasing to 400 in 2010. The number of kilometers traveled by car in France remained stable at around 1000 from 1990 to 2005, followed by this figure decreased to nearly 900 in 2010.
 
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Many people think that increasing the petrol price is the most important method to deal with traffic congestion and pollution.From my viewpoint, I totally disagree with this statement since I still strongly believe that there are more optimal remedies which should be conducted to alleviate this thorny problem.

The first key rationale is inflation. In fact/ To be more specific, the expenses of goods are higher because of increasing the price of transfer goods such as food, beverage, medicine… Therefore many people, especially the poor, could not cover the fees of these goods. The second reason-> Another reasonable explanation is the moral problems of oil sellers. To express it in another way, because these people prioritize profits rather than other factors, they could produce fake oil to earn money, which leads to accidents of vehicles, or even demise of travelers who use that oil.

Due to the aforementioned reasons, I am of the firm opinion that there are other measures which must be applied to tackle this problem from the root.
raise people’s awareness about the importance of traffic and environmental problems. In fact, the government should launch many campaigns to encourage people = humans = citizens = individuals to use public transports such as buses, or/and trains

impose higher tax for private vehicles. As a result, many humans would probably consider carefully before buying them and think about alternatives to save money.


These solutions will make a great contribution to the reduction of toxic emissions = fumes and private vehicles on the road, enhancing air quality and making roads more spacious.
 
  • Từ miêu tả số liệu:​

number = quantity: 1000,2000,65647,....


percentage = ratio = proportion = rate: %
increase/ growth (n) -> grow (v)/ rise/ acceleration (n) -> accelerate (v)/ rocket

drop/ decline/ deceleration (n) -> decelerate (v)/ recession - > recede (v)/ decrease/ plunge/ plummet

remain stable/unchanged = experience/ undergo a period of stability in + time

  • Từ miêu tả sự thay đổi số liệu:
  • Tăng/ Giảm mạnh: dramatic = considerable = exponential = substantial = significant
  • Tăng/ Giảm nhẹ: slight, gradual, negligible, trivial
  • Từ nối: Another striking point is (that)… = It is also noticeable that …. = Additionally = In addition… = Furthermore = Meanwhile = By contrast = Similarly
  • chỉ tính ước lệ: around, about, approximately, just under/over, almost…
 
The oil production in SA grew sharply to 15.8 million barrels in
2010.

1. The amount of oil produced in SA underwent a surge, rising to
15.8 million barrels in 2010

2. A surge was recorded in the oil production in SA, with its figure
growing to 15.8 million barrels in 2010
3.There was a remarkable increase in the oil production in SA,
with 15.8 million oil barrels produced in 2010
4.SA observed a jump in the oil production,
 
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