thảo luận Practicing English with vOzers :D

[hieudien14310]

It's been a week since I submitted my exercise and I haven't yet received anything your feedback on my exercise.
I think I can answer "wondered" by myself but I still want to know the reason why I was rejected. Is my exercise not good enough? Or something reason else?
If it's about my exercise, please tell me where and how I was wrong.
I don't absolutely care if I get rejected or not, what I absolutely care about that is why you don't give me anything about your feedback as you said to me that you will feedback within 2 working days.
I will so happy if I received your feedback after I sent this mail.
Thank you for reading this mail.
P.s: I am so sorry when I wrote wrong your name in the last mail.

thank you

 

[QTTTTT]

Hello guys, my milestone is to achieve at least 6.5 on the IELTS exam in the next 7 months so Is it possible while my four English capacities are around 5-5.5? Hope to receive your precious advice.
P/s: This is my first sentence in English since I've joined this forum.

 

[huubjnh32]

I have been trying to use "Elsa" application to practice speaking. However, I keep getting it wrong and the description from "Elsa" doesn't help much. If anyone could share tips on how to practice speaking and pronunciation, please help.

 

[khoan888join]

I have been trying to use "Elsa" application to practice speaking. However, I keep getting it wrong and the description from "Elsa" doesn't help much. If anyone could share tips on how to practice speaking and pronunciation, please help.

Could you be more specific, like what words are the hardest for u to pronounce?

 

[NNP]

Hi guys, i just begin learn english with "cake" app from zero. Can someone please tell me what's different between "i'm shaking like a leaf" and "i was shaking like a leaf"? I don't understand those expression.

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[EinUchiha]

hi, i decide to start daily writing challange, in that will write 100 words everyday and post in there, hope everyone could join me or fixing my errors

#1
A few days ago I was watching the match between Vietnam vs China. I was so excited before the match because so many reasons. First, it is a national team’s match. Second, it is a game with China, every Vietnamese want to beat China in everything and right now football is the easiest way to do it. Coming to the match, it was give up when the team lost 2 goals at 70 minutes. When the morning come, I check the result and surprised that we lost 2-3. I did not think that we could scored two goals in that time. Also we are lost but I’m regret not to watch it. About the Vietnam chance to World Cup, I think we have no chance now, but I will watch the whole matches the team play and not miss a single minute like this game.

I watched the match between Vietnam vs China a few days ago (I see no reason to use past continuous but I may be wrong tho). I was so excited before the match because of so many reasons (or for so many reasons | after "because it should be a setense). First, it was a national team match. Second, it was a game against China. Every Vietnamese want to beat China in everything (this setence sound really wrong but I have no idea how to fix it lmao) and right now football is the easiest way to do it. Coming to the match, I gave up all hopes ("it was give up" sound really weird to me, so I changed it a bit) when our team lost 2 goals at 70 minutes. When the morning came, I checked the result and was surprised that we lost 2-3. I did not think that we could score two goals in that time. Also we lost but I regret not watching it. About the Vietnam's chance to World Cup, I think we have no chance now, but I will watch the every match our team plays and not miss a single minute like this game.

Overall you should know that when you are telling a story it has to be in past sentence. I love your idea about writing 100 words everyday, I really hope you can keep this up.

 

[EinUchiha]

Hi mấy bác, em tính gửi 1 cái mail để hỏi về lý do tại sao 1 tuần trôi qua mà em vẫn ko nhận đc feedback từ đợt pv. Mong mấy bác check câu cú, ngữ pháp, dấu chấm, dấu phẩy giúp em với nha. Cho nó chuẩn chỉ

It's been a week since I submitted my exercise and I haven't yet received anything your feedback on my exercise.
I think I can answer "sự thắc mắc này" by myself but I still want to know the reason why I was rejected. Is my exercise not good enough? Or something reason else?
If it's about my exercise, please tell me where and how I was wrong.
I don't absolutely care if I get rejected or not, what I absolutely care that is why you don't give me anything your feedback as you said me that you will feedback within 2 working days.
I will so happy if I received your feedback after I sent this mail.
Thank you for reading this mail.
P.s: I so sorry when I wrote wrong your name in last mail.

Well I think you should not send them an e-mail like this. For writing e-mail it suppose to be a little more academic.

I think I can answer "sự thắc mắc này" by myself but I still want to know the reason why I was rejected. Is my exercise not good enough? Or something reason else?

I don't absolutely care if I get rejected or not

these 2 sentence may sound a little bit arrogance when it laid out in the email.
In my opinion, your email should have started with something like

Thank you for giving me this opportunity ...

to show gratitude. Later, you should be humble about the reasons, show them that you just want to improve yourself,...

 

[milet_]

hi, i decide to start daily writing challange, in that will write 100 words everyday and post in there, hope everyone could join me or fixing my errors

#1
A few days ago I was watching the match between Vietnam vs China. I was so excited before the match because so many reasons. First, it is a national team’s match. Second, it is a game with China, every Vietnamese want to beat China in everything and right now football is the easiest way to do it. Coming to the match, it was give up when the team lost 2 goals at 70 minutes. When the morning come, I check the result and surprised that we lost 2-3. I did not think that we could scored two goals in that time. Also we are lost but I’m regret not to watch it. About the Vietnam chance to World Cup, I think we have no chance now, but I will watch the whole matches the team play and not miss a single minute like this game.

#2
Did you hear about Newcastle, recently they were bought by a state fund which has the asset up to hundreds billlion dollar. Because of the takerover, it will make a big change in the league and the world football. The tranfer market has one more big player. Newcastle want to win the Premier League, they have to change the roster. First they sacked their coach and when the winter transfer market come they will add up a lot of new good players. The Premier League now having an extra contender that has potential to win the league and maybe it will take a few seasons like what was happen with Manchester City, well success don't come overnight. It is intersting to see the leauge is more competing. We were wating for a Super League but it was not come true and perhap this is the Super League we could have.

 

[dd721411]

Hi guys, i just begin learn english with "cake" app from zero. Can someone please tell me what's different between "i'm shaking like a leaf" and "i was shaking like a leaf"? I don't understand those expression.

/// bác nào sửa giúp mình đoạn trên viết có đúng không vậy. Thanks!

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Can you please explain your idea in Vietnamese?
Bạn có thể giải thích ý của bạn bằng Tiếng Việt không?

 

[NNP]

Can you please explain your idea in Vietnamese?
Bạn có thể giải thích ý của bạn bằng Tiếng Việt không?

Ý mình là mình mới bắt đầu học tiếng Anh trên cái app Cake. Mất gốc mà hổm rày nghỉ dịch rảnh nên tìm hiểu lại
Hôm qua học trên Cake nó có 2 câu:
-i'm shaking like a leaf --> nó dịch là "Tôi sợ phát run"
-i was shaking like a leaf --> nó dịch là "Tôi run như cầy sấy"
Mình không hiểu 2 câu đó nó khác nhau như thế nào, ngoài cái thì của động từ to be mà nó dịch ra khác nhau như vậy. Và lúc nào thì dùng "am shaking", lúc nào thì dùng "was shaking"
Bác nào giải thích giúp, thanks!

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[huubjnh32]

Could you be more specific, like what words are the hardest for u to pronounce?

I don't recall a particular word but I often have problems with situations like /l/ sound at the end of the word.

 

[whitemask]

Ý mình là mình mới bắt đầu học tiếng Anh trên cái app Cake. Mất gốc mà hổm rày nghỉ dịch rảnh nên tìm hiểu lại
Hôm qua học trên Cake nó có 2 câu:
-i'm shaking like a leaf --> nó dịch là "Tôi sợ phát run"
-i was shaking like a leaf --> nó dịch là "Tôi run như cầy sấy"
Mình không hiểu 2 câu đó nó khác nhau như thế nào, ngoài cái thì của động từ to be mà nó dịch ra khác nhau như vậy. Và lúc nào thì dùng "am shaking", lúc nào thì dùng "was shaking"
Bác nào giải thích giúp, thanks!

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I'm shaking => present continous => an action which is happening right now
I was shaking => simple past continuos => an action which happened in the past

I think both sentences have the same meaning with different points of time.

 

[milet_]

#2
Did you hear about Newcastle, recently they were bought by a state fund which has the asset up to hundreds billlion dollar. Because of the takerover, it will make a big change in the league and the world football. The tranfer market has one more big player. Newcastle want to win the Premier League, they have to change the roster. First they sacked their coach and when the winter transfer market come they will add up a lot of new good players. The Premier League now having an extra contender that has potential to win the league and maybe it will take a few seasons like what was happen with Manchester City, well success don't come overnight. It is intersting to see the leauge is more competing. We were wating for a Super League but it was not come true and perhap this is the Super League we could have.

#3
Franche Football has just annouced the shortlist for Baloon d’Or 2021. As we expected, the list had the name like Messi, Ronaldo, Lewandowski, etc. All did play well in 2020-2021 season. I read all things from newspapers, Reddit, Voz and even some rate in gambling sites. The result is always Messi will win this year. He had a good season by himself in personal stats with 46 goals in 60 games follow the club official site with both national team and the club, very impressive with someone at his age. The hugest advantage for him is he won the Copa America. He was waited so long to win a title with the national team. Finally, I hope that he could win this 7th Ballon d’Or for himself and not the last one he could win.

 

[Big boom]

#3
Franche Football has just annouced the shortlist for Baloon d’Or 2021. As we expected, the list had the name like Messi, Ronaldo, Lewandowski, etc. All did play well in 2020-2021 season. I read all things from newspapers, Reddit, Voz and even some rate in gambling sites. The result is always Messi will win this year. He had a good season by himself in personal stats with 46 goals in 60 games follow the club official site with both national team and the club, very impressive with someone at his age. The hugest advantage for him is he won the Copa America. He was waited so long to win a title with the national team. Finally, I hope that he could win this 7th Ballon d’Or for himself and not the last one he could win.

Franche Football has just announced the shortlist for Baloon d’Or 2021. As we expected, the list had the name like Messi, Ronaldo, Lewandowski, etc. All did play well in 2020-2021 season. I read all things from newspapers, Reddit, Voz and even some rate in gambling sites. The result is always Messi will win this year. He had a good season by himself in personal stats with 46 goals in 60 games following the club's official site with both the national team and the club, very impressive with someone at his age. The hugest advantage for him is he won the Copa America. He was waited so long to win a title with the national team. Finally, I hope that he could win this 7th Ballon d’Or for himself and not the last one he could win

I see that you are a big fan of football, you showed a lot of information about players, clubs, transfer market through a daily writing challenge. You are a self-disciplined person too when keep writing 100 words every day. I am a lazy person, but I hope can change myself by reading your writing day by day, take inspiration from it. Go back home from work, I often lie on the sofa and hug my laptop to lounge on internet. after a simple dinner, I would watch stock charts to prepare a plan for the next day and go to bed at 11 pm. It is a boring life that I have been repeating for a long time.

 

[2210i]

Ý mình là mình mới bắt đầu học tiếng Anh trên cái app Cake. Mất gốc mà hổm rày nghỉ dịch rảnh nên tìm hiểu lại
Hôm qua học trên Cake nó có 2 câu:
-i'm shaking like a leaf --> nó dịch là "Tôi sợ phát run"
-i was shaking like a leaf --> nó dịch là "Tôi run như cầy sấy"
Mình không hiểu 2 câu đó nó khác nhau như thế nào, ngoài cái thì của động từ to be mà nó dịch ra khác nhau như vậy. Và lúc nào thì dùng "am shaking", lúc nào thì dùng "was shaking"
Bác nào giải thích giúp, thanks!

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Just like what you said, the only difference here is the tense. You shouldn't translate word by word like that, try to understand the meaning of whole sentence, in this case, whatever kinds of "run", you need to focus on when you shake

 

[milet_]

#3
Franche Football has just annouced the shortlist for Baloon d’Or 2021. As we expected, the list had the name like Messi, Ronaldo, Lewandowski, etc. All did play well in 2020-2021 season. I read all things from newspapers, Reddit, Voz and even some rate in gambling sites. The result is always Messi will win this year. He had a good season by himself in personal stats with 46 goals in 60 games follow the club official site with both national team and the club, very impressive with someone at his age. The hugest advantage for him is he won the Copa America. He was waited so long to win a title with the national team. Finally, I hope that he could win this 7th Ballon d’Or for himself and not the last one he could win.

#4
Vietnam’s 4th match in World Cup qualifiers has just been happened the day before. Sadly, it was a lost again. In the 39th min we had the first goal, but seemed like something wrong here. The referee checked VAR for the stituation Tan Tai tackled and it was right. Not enough, the referee even checked the stituation before to see it was offside or not. The goal was accepted with so many emotion. The happiness not occurred too long when Oman get their goal to tied the game and the 1st half ended. The second half came and we lost 2 more goals, nothing to say here. For three previous matches, I think we had something to regret but for this game is nothing. It was our system’s fault and Oman exploited it, a lot of things have to review after this match.

I see that you are a big fan of football, you showed a lot of information about players, clubs, transfer market through a daily writing challenge. You are a self-disciplined person too when keep writing 100 words every day. I am a lazy person, but I hope can change myself by reading your writing day by day, take inspiration from it. Go back home from work, I often lie on the sofa and hug my laptop to lounge on internet. after a simple dinner, I would watch stock charts to prepare a plan for the next day and go to bed at 11 pm. It is a boring life that I have been repeating for a long time.

you can starting by dicussing things from my post, easy right?

 

[Kecodon139]

I write this comment to get the senior title.

 

[tinhamnho]

Hi guys, i just begin learn english with "cake" app from zero. Can someone please tell me what's different between "i'm shaking like a leaf" and "i was shaking like a leaf"? I don't understand those expression.

/// bác nào sửa giúp mình đoạn trên viết có đúng không vậy. Thanks!

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"I" viết hoa

Begin learn -> began to learn/ began learning

English viết hoa

With "cake" app -> with the app "cake". Mình nghĩ with the "cake" app cũng được.

From zero mình nghĩ nên để sau learn English để rõ nghĩa hơn. Để cuối câu cũng không sai, nhưng ng đọc có thể hiểu cái app đến từ (nhà sản xuất) zero, hoặc from zero là một phần tên app. Trường hợp hiểu lầm cũng khó xảy ra, nhưng mà để diễn đặt rõ ý nhất thì mình nghĩ nên như vậy.

What's different between -> Chỗ này mình nghĩ k sai ngữ pháp nhưng nghe nó kì, sửa thành "What are the differences between...".

Those expression -> thêm s số nhiều

 

[milet_]

#4
Vietnam’s 4th match in World Cup qualifiers has just been happened the day before. Sadly, it was a lost again. In the 39th min we had the first goal, but seemed like something wrong here. The referee checked VAR for the stituation Tan Tai tackled and it was right. Not enough, the referee even checked the stituation before to see it was offside or not. The goal was accepted with so many emotion. The happiness not occurred too long when Oman get their goal to tied the game and the 1st half ended. The second half came and we lost 2 more goals, nothing to say here. For three previous matches, I think we had something to regret but for this game is nothing. It was our system’s fault and Oman exploited it, a lot of things have to review after this match.

#5
In Transfer Window Summer 2021, something crazy things did happen. Messi going for free, Ronaldo for €15m and Mbappe for €200m but was declined by PSG. The most controversial is Mbappe story, he was basically wanted to go out for Real but PSG wanted to keep him up. Mbappe showed he really want to play for Real and Real bid a lot to take but that was not enough for PSG, the number they wanted was higher, Real was failed to bargain the fee. Also there were some sources said that Real want him for free in 2022. PSG’s president respond about this kind of information was he would never sell him or he would going for free. Hard to say what would happen next but one thing I sure that is Mbappe will go to Madrid and the number for him must satisfied PSG.

 

[milet_]

#5
In Transfer Window Summer 2021, something crazy things did happen. Messi going for free, Ronaldo for €15m and Mbappe for €200m but was declined by PSG. The most controversial is Mbappe story, he was basically wanted to go out for Real but PSG wanted to keep him up. Mbappe showed he really want to play for Real and Real bid a lot to take but that was not enough for PSG, the number they wanted was higher, Real was failed to bargain the fee. Also there were some sources said that Real want him for free in 2022. PSG’s president respond about this kind of information was he would never sell him or he would going for free. Hard to say what would happen next but one thing I sure that is Mbappe will go to Madrid and the number for him must satisfied PSG.

#6
One more about the very hot young star on the transfer market, it is Erling Haaland. What’s good about him? Along with Mbappe, the two are the biggest young star right now, who are expected to replace Messi and Ronaldo in the near future. What make him so hot on the transfer market? First is he very young, at 21 what he did make the world excited. Second is he can read the opponent defensive line well then make them confuse to have an open space. Final is his great acceleration and speed along with his pricise shooting make him unstoppable. As a result, he did scored 27 goals and 6 assists in 28 games in Bundesliga. What a great player!