milet_
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I would like to talk about Real Madrid, Barcelona and PSG simultaneously because they are not interested in Haaland,asunlike thesetwo clubs which Iwas saidmentioned before. To start with Barcelona, we allknewknow that they were in a financial crisis, they even had to let Messi go for free. But as some sources said, they were invested €1.5 billion by a company in Dubai and Haaland’s signing as the first star to build the new dynasty after Messi‘s resignation. We will continue with Real and PSG, both have a link and it is Mbappe. In the last summer transfer market, Mbappe said he wanted to go to Madrid. So we had some news about PSG’s reservation plan in replacing Mbappe with Haaland. Asifithappanedhappened, Mbappe stayed in Paris. Same as PSG, Haaland is also a reservation plan for Madrid if theycan notcannot sign Mbappe. But more than that, some sources said they wanted both. In my prediction, it is veryhigh chancelikely Mbappe will go to Madrid and the same for Haaland to go to Paris if PSG wants to find a new striker to replace him. Finally, the chance of Haaland going to which one of these three clubs are not clearly, we have to waitedand see how PSG and Mbappe will deal with others to have a better conclusion.
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