thắc mắc Practice Speaking part 1 (xin review nhận xét)

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Hi all, This is my conservation in Part 1 IELTS speaking, pls give me a hand by reviewing and evaluating it, thank y so much
(Vietnamese : Mình sắp thi ielts, mình muốn xin nhận xét bài nói ạ)
1Can you tell me about your hometown in Vietnam?
Ok, well, I was born in Hanoi, where is capital of Vietnam, the better part of my time, I always live in HN. But I am going to live on the outskirt of Hanoi to escape the hustle and bustle of the metropolis

How do you typically spend your weekends?

of course, great. Well, I have a particular liking for games. To be honest, the weekend is the time I blow off my steam after the heavy workload, so I am immersed in Games which are both challenging and fascinating


What types of food do you enjoy eating, both traditional Vietnamese dishes and international cuisine?

Well, Potato is a rewarding food. Do you guess why ? because Potato is part and parcel of my daily routine before working and studying. Withoud it, I couldn't work because I could feel tired and hungry. However, I believe that Potato is also nature vegetable to provide advantage vitamins to your stomatch and skin

Do you like music? Why or why not?

this is an awesome question, well , of course, I believe that everyone loves music. You know, Music is part and parcel of my activities before working and studying. On the other hand, we listen music to blow off steam in spare time

What is your favorite season of the year, and why do you like it?

well, this is an awesome question I have ever seen, Well, I love summer. Do you know the reason. Well, Summer is part and parcel of my childhood when I was a child. U know, After a heavy workload in school, summer is the time where I unwind, blow of steam before going to school again. Having said that, summer is too hot and arid, It hardly ever has rain and precipitation


How do you usually spend your weekends?

yah, this is brilliant question I have ever listened. Well, you know, Listening to music and Hanging out with my pals are part and percel of my daily activities in my weekends. You know, we are a die-hard fan of Tailor swift, well, my wildest dream is facing her practically. On the other hands, I still play games to unwind after a heavy workload of the weekdays
 
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Nhìn sơ thì thấy có mấy cái lỗi ngữ pháp rồi:
  • where is capital of Vietnam, chỗ này dùng which chứ nhỉ, hay đơn giản là Hanoi - the capital of Vietnam
  • Do you guess why ? -> Can you guess why?
  • nature vegetable -> natural với thiếu mạo từ a
...
Diễn đạt thì lười sửa quá, sơ sơ:
  • a heavy workload in school -> Trẻ con mà dùng workload thì hơi kì kì, sửa lại kiểu an intense learning session gì đó
  • Hay chỗ On the other hand, we listen music to blow off steam in spare time -> Sao lại dùng On the other hand ở đây nhỉ, có thể sửa thành kiểu như It's a common practice that
 
Khen đểu ngta ít thôi thím, câu nào cũng thảo mai khen hay, câu hỏi thú vị =.=
Thím nên lên youtube coi tụi thi speaking điểm cao nó nói gì rồi lấy về luyện thì hay hơn đó.
E nói tiếng Anh ngu lắm chỉ biết nhận xét v thôi.
 
Hi all, This is my conservation in Part 1 IELTS speaking, pls give me a hand by reviewing and evaluating it, thank y so much
(Vietnamese : Mình sắp thi ielts, mình muốn xin nhận xét bài nói ạ)
1Can you tell me about your hometown in Vietnam?
Ok, well, I was born in Hanoi, where is capital of Vietnam, the better part of my time, I always live in HN. But I am going to live on the outskirt of Hanoi to escape the hustle and bustle of the metropolis

How do you typically spend your weekends?

of course, great. Well, I have a particular liking for games. To be honest, the weekend is the time I blow off my steam after the heavy workload, so I am immersed in Games which are both challenging and fascinating


What types of food do you enjoy eating, both traditional Vietnamese dishes and international cuisine?

Well, Potato is a rewarding food. Do you guess why ? because Potato is part and parcel of my daily routine before working and studying. Withoud it, I couldn't work because I could feel tired and hungry. However, I believe that Potato is also nature vegetable to provide advantage vitamins to your stomatch and skin

Do you like music? Why or why not?

this is an awesome question, well , of course, I believe that everyone loves music. You know, Music is part and parcel of my activities before working and studying. On the other hand, we listen music to blow off steam in spare time

What is your favorite season of the year, and why do you like it?

well, this is an awesome question I have ever seen, Well, I love summer. Do you know the reason. Well, Summer is part and parcel of my childhood when I was a child. U know, After a heavy workload in school, summer is the time where I unwind, blow of steam before going to school again. Having said that, summer is too hot and arid, It hardly ever has rain and precipitation


How do you usually spend your weekends?

yah, this is brilliant question I have ever listened. Well, you know, Listening to music and Hanging out with my pals are part and percel of my daily activities in my weekends. You know, we are a die-hard fan of Tailor swift, well, my wildest dream is facing her practically. On the other hands, I still play games to unwind after a heavy workload of the weekdays

1/ Thím có thể câu giờ để nghĩ câu trả lời bằng cách paraphrase lại câu hỏi thay vì dùng những câu quá chung chung như trên.
2/ Bớt học thuộc lòng một số cụm mà thím nghĩ là ghi điểm, thay vào đó hãy tập sử dụng các cụm mà thím thấy người bản ngữ sử dụng khi nói về chủ đề đấy cho đến khi thím có thể cảm nhận rằng mình nói chúng ra thực sự trôi chảy. "my wildest dream is facing her practically" là một ví dụ. Nếu là mình, mình chỉ nói đơn giản rằng "I've been dreaming to see her in person one day."
3/ Phần ngữ pháp cũng là 1 trong 4 tiêu chí đánh giá của bài nói. Thím nên luyện thêm để cải thiện. Nói ra miệng đương nhiên người bản ngữ cũng có lúc sai, tuy nhiên nếu thím đọc bài mà thím viết ra, có thể nhận thức và tự sửa được những lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản thì thím sẽ cải thiện được điểm số khá lớn, không chỉ trong bài nói mà cả bài viết nữa.
 
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