thắc mắc ielts writing task 1 practice

The given charts illustrate the percentage of new secondary school graduates enrolling in university. From an overall viewpoint, it is discernible that the percentage of graduates in all countries increased. Notably, the percentage of Angola increased significantly during the whole period


The proportion of new graduates enrolling in University in Germany, which is the highest figure among all the rates of new graduates enrolling in University in 2010(bổ dọc, so sánh tất cả các figure cùng 2010). This figure grew considerably from around 68% in 2010 to nearly 80% in 2020(trend - bổ ngang). Undergoing a similar trend but at a lower rate, there was a significant growth from above 40% to approximately 60% in the ratio of new graduates studying university in Angola from 2010 to 2020.

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Regarding the proportion of new graduates enrolling in University in Brazil, which is around 10% lower than the figure for Malaysia, with above 55%(tương tự đoạn 1, bổ dọc ở 2010 để so sánh). This figure then declined to around 50% before increasing nearly 58% at the end of the period. By contrast, the rate of new graduates enrolling in university in Malaysia reached a peak at around 63% in 2015, which later gradually declined by 2% after 5 years.

The given three maps depict the development which takes place in XXXX within 40 years from 1950. From an overall perspective, it is discernible that a comparison among the three maps reveals a renovation from a natural area to a modern and recreational one(thay thế area).

Looking at the maps from 1950 to 1970 in more detail, to the Northwest, sand dunes remained unchanged during this period. Meanwhile, there is a destruction of beach huts for the purpose of the construction of villas. To the Northeast, Woodland was removed by Caravan park and the track was upgraded to roads thanks to the establishment of Caravan park.

Regarding 2 maps from 1970 to 1990, the development/transformation of the beach in the next 20 years, the most considerable transformation can be easily seen due to the establishment of a hotel and surf school, which was attributable to the destruction of the old villas. Another striking point is the replacement of the western sand dunes by a completely new landscaped garden, in conjunction with the renovation of the Caravan park into a modern car park in the East.