Gametocdo2
Junior Member
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JordanPham
Senior Member
--- Day 32
--- Balancing
Today I'd like to share with you my opinion about the Vinfast business in the United States. Some advocates believe that marketing should go first, and production comes after in the car industry. What are your opinions about this idea? Is it possible for Vinfast to succeed in the North American market?
There are many aspects to do to become a leading company in a specific industry including marketing and production. In the automobile, things are even more complex because cars are playing an important role in modern life. I totally disagree with these opinions that a company should brag about a certain product first, then try to fix any operational issues later.
First of all, people are spending a huge amount of time driving in their cars and safety is among the most crucial criteria when choosing a car. If a car is having many technical issues, it will need to test, fix and adjust. Once the errors are cleared, then launch. Otherwise, the subsequent accidents will cost manufacturers a lot of money to reimburse. In the United States, for example, a company could lose millions of dollars paying for safety-related issues. In addition, a firm would face many risks of suing and legal compliance.
Second, having a good reputation for quality cars is much better than bad rumors. Spending money on Operations and Research is an effective, sustainable way compared to sponsoring marketers and KOLs when it comes to the car industry. For example, Tesla has a good reputation for the technology and reliability of their cars. They have spent little on marketing campaigns when we take into account the sales revenue.
In conclusion, when we refer to the long run in the car industry, a manufacturer should focus on the safety and reliability of their cars first. Only after satisfying a high-quality standard, marketing is then used to enhance the market's awareness to boost the sales figures.
--- Balancing
Today I'd like to share with you my opinion about the Vinfast business in the United States. Some advocates believe that marketing should go first, and production comes after in the car industry. What are your opinions about this idea? Is it possible for Vinfast to succeed in the North American market?
There are many aspects to do to become a leading company in a specific industry including marketing and production. In the automobile, things are even more complex because cars are playing an important role in modern life. I totally disagree with these opinions that a company should brag about a certain product first, then try to fix any operational issues later.
First of all, people are spending a huge amount of time driving in their cars and safety is among the most crucial criteria when choosing a car. If a car is having many technical issues, it will need to test, fix and adjust. Once the errors are cleared, then launch. Otherwise, the subsequent accidents will cost manufacturers a lot of money to reimburse. In the United States, for example, a company could lose millions of dollars paying for safety-related issues. In addition, a firm would face many risks of suing and legal compliance.
Second, having a good reputation for quality cars is much better than bad rumors. Spending money on Operations and Research is an effective, sustainable way compared to sponsoring marketers and KOLs when it comes to the car industry. For example, Tesla has a good reputation for the technology and reliability of their cars. They have spent little on marketing campaigns when we take into account the sales revenue.
In conclusion, when we refer to the long run in the car industry, a manufacturer should focus on the safety and reliability of their cars first. Only after satisfying a high-quality standard, marketing is then used to enhance the market's awareness to boost the sales figures.
JordanPham
Senior Member
--- Day 33
--- Helpful
The topic today is "There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words."
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It is believed that students are studying a lot to be successful academically, including academic subjects and non-academic ones. Many people think that subject-related workload is too much and academically irrelevant subjects should be eliminated to ease the hard work so that children can focus on academic subjects. To some extent, I quite disagree with these ideas.
First of all, I have to say that workload in schools is getting heavy and unnecessary. There are many coursework and knowledge which are no need to add to a curriculum at some grades. For example, differential equations are not necessarily taught in grade 10. It is more suitable when teaching this concept in grade 12. There are many terms that are introduced too early in the syllabus. As a result, time spent in other helpful activities is cut down significantly and children have to work on their own in a library or at home to get high marks.
However, the idea of getting rid of non-academic subjects is a step too far to solve this problem. We, humans, need to be balanced in every part of our lives. We need to learn many different kinds of knowledge to be good citizens in our modern society. For instance, sports is playing an important role in professional life as it helps us to reduce stress level, become healthier and gain creativity. Learning and practicing physical activities in schools will help children to establish good habits and have a better chance to maintain them when they grow up.
In conclusion, the workload that students need to complete in schools these days is huge and it needs to be reduced suitably. Instead of removing the non-academic subjects from curriculums, we have many better solutions to deal with it, such as cutting off the high-level concepts and ideas.
--- Helpful
The topic today is "There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words."
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It is believed that students are studying a lot to be successful academically, including academic subjects and non-academic ones. Many people think that subject-related workload is too much and academically irrelevant subjects should be eliminated to ease the hard work so that children can focus on academic subjects. To some extent, I quite disagree with these ideas.
First of all, I have to say that workload in schools is getting heavy and unnecessary. There are many coursework and knowledge which are no need to add to a curriculum at some grades. For example, differential equations are not necessarily taught in grade 10. It is more suitable when teaching this concept in grade 12. There are many terms that are introduced too early in the syllabus. As a result, time spent in other helpful activities is cut down significantly and children have to work on their own in a library or at home to get high marks.
However, the idea of getting rid of non-academic subjects is a step too far to solve this problem. We, humans, need to be balanced in every part of our lives. We need to learn many different kinds of knowledge to be good citizens in our modern society. For instance, sports is playing an important role in professional life as it helps us to reduce stress level, become healthier and gain creativity. Learning and practicing physical activities in schools will help children to establish good habits and have a better chance to maintain them when they grow up.
In conclusion, the workload that students need to complete in schools these days is huge and it needs to be reduced suitably. Instead of removing the non-academic subjects from curriculums, we have many better solutions to deal with it, such as cutting off the high-level concepts and ideas.
JordanPham
Senior Member
--- Day 34
--- Focused yooooooooooooooo
The graphic demonstrates the percentage of the health care cost in the total GDP throughout twelve countries in Europe over three periods of time.
With regard to changes from 2002 to 2012, there were four countries that didn't change their proportions of health care cost, that are Belgium, Estonia, Spain and Switzerland at 10%, 3%, 8% and 11% respectively. The other countries just fluctuated in a small amount by 1% over time, except France with a 2% of fluctuation during the 2007 - 2012 period.
Interestingly, there were huge differences between other countries in terms of the percentage of health care cost compared to the total GDP. These figures in Switzerland are over three times as much as in Estonia between 2002 and 2012. The figures varied but did not exceed 11% among surveyed countries.
Overall, there were small changes over time in all of the surveyed countries when it comes to the ratio of health expenditure to the total GDP. Some countries kept the figures constant, while others fluctuated slightly. As we can see, healthcare expenditure took the least account of GDP in Estonia and the most in Switzerland.
--- Focused yooooooooooooooo
The graphic demonstrates the percentage of the health care cost in the total GDP throughout twelve countries in Europe over three periods of time.
With regard to changes from 2002 to 2012, there were four countries that didn't change their proportions of health care cost, that are Belgium, Estonia, Spain and Switzerland at 10%, 3%, 8% and 11% respectively. The other countries just fluctuated in a small amount by 1% over time, except France with a 2% of fluctuation during the 2007 - 2012 period.
Interestingly, there were huge differences between other countries in terms of the percentage of health care cost compared to the total GDP. These figures in Switzerland are over three times as much as in Estonia between 2002 and 2012. The figures varied but did not exceed 11% among surveyed countries.
Overall, there were small changes over time in all of the surveyed countries when it comes to the ratio of health expenditure to the total GDP. Some countries kept the figures constant, while others fluctuated slightly. As we can see, healthcare expenditure took the least account of GDP in Estonia and the most in Switzerland.
Dong Phuong Muoi Muoi
Senior Member
Nowadays, fast-food restaurants become more and more common, people tend to eat low-quality meals. This easy will examine the main causes of people have low-quality diets and possible solutions to this problem.
The two main causes of low-quality diets are people lack of time for take care theirself and easy to buy fast food. When people stuck with pressed tasks during working time, they tend to use fast-food as a way come back to their works quickly. For instance, when people must overtime in work, they eat fast food to complete dinner. Because of that, they have a lot of inadequate diets. Also, When fast-food restaurants have appeared almost living places such as building, school, shopping mall… people can easy to eat fast-food meals. For example, massive fast-food restaurants can see in almost building, only go down and buy it easy.
Some possible solutions to this problem are promoting people spend more time to theirself and restricting open fast-food restaurants.Government can promote people spend more time to theirself, they need to more pay attention and prevent their meals.Moreover, Government need to upgrade policies in opening fast-food restaurants, cut down non-standard foods what contain big affections to health people. This way, people will have less choices when they would like to eat fast-food.
To conclude, fast-food restaurants turn on common that lead to be people eat more low-quality diets. However, Government can significantly lessen low-quality diets by promoting people spending more time to theirself and restricting open fast-food restaurants.
The two main causes of low-quality diets are people lack of time for take care theirself and easy to buy fast food. When people stuck with pressed tasks during working time, they tend to use fast-food as a way come back to their works quickly. For instance, when people must overtime in work, they eat fast food to complete dinner. Because of that, they have a lot of inadequate diets. Also, When fast-food restaurants have appeared almost living places such as building, school, shopping mall… people can easy to eat fast-food meals. For example, massive fast-food restaurants can see in almost building, only go down and buy it easy.
Some possible solutions to this problem are promoting people spend more time to theirself and restricting open fast-food restaurants.Government can promote people spend more time to theirself, they need to more pay attention and prevent their meals.Moreover, Government need to upgrade policies in opening fast-food restaurants, cut down non-standard foods what contain big affections to health people. This way, people will have less choices when they would like to eat fast-food.
To conclude, fast-food restaurants turn on common that lead to be people eat more low-quality diets. However, Government can significantly lessen low-quality diets by promoting people spending more time to theirself and restricting open fast-food restaurants.
Tài Lẻ Tài Lo
Senior Member
Cám ơn bác đã truyền cảm hứng
Dcoldzzz
Junior Member
She's in love with who I am
Back in high school, I used to bus it to the dance (yeah)
Now I hit the FBO with duffles in my hands
I did half a Xan, thirteen hours 'til I land
Had me out like a light, ayy, yeah
Like a light, ayy, yeah
Like a light, ayy
Slept through the flight, ayy
Knocked for the night, ayy, 767, man
This shit got double bedroom, man
I still got scores to settle, man
I crept down the block (down the block), made a right (yeah, right)
Cut the lights (yeah, what?), paid the price (yeah)
Niggas think it's sweet (nah, nah), it's on sight (yeah, what?)
Nothin' nice (yeah), baguettes in my ice (aww, man)
Jesus Christ (yeah), checks over stripes (yeah)
That's what I like (yeah), that's what we like (yeah)
Lost my respect, you not a threat
When I shoot my shot, that shit wetty like I'm Sheck (bitch!)
See the shots that I took (ayy), wet like I'm Book (ayy)
Wet like I'm Lizzie, I be spinnin' Valley
Circle blocks 'til I'm dizzy (yeah, what?)
Like where is he? (Yeah, what?)
No one seen him (yeah, yeah)
I'm tryna clean 'em (yeah)
She's in love with who I am
Back in high school, I used to bus it to the dance
Now I hit the FBO with duffles in my hand (woo!)
I did half a Xan, thirteen hours 'til I land
Had me out like a light, like a light
Like a light, like a light
Like a light (yeah), like a light
Like a light
Yeah, passed the dawgs a celly
Sendin' texts, ain't sendin' kites, yeah
He said, "Keep that on lock"
I said, "You know this shit, it's stife", yeah
It's absolute (yeah), I'm back reboot (it's lit!)
LaFerrari to Jamba Juice, yeah (skrrt, skrrt)
We back on the road, they jumpin' off, no parachute, yeah
Shawty in the back
She said she workin' on her glutes, yeah (oh my God)
Ain't by the book, yeah
This how it look, yeah
'Bout a check, yeah
Just check the foots, yeah
Pass this to my daughter, I'ma show her what it took (yeah)
Baby mama cover Forbes, got these other bitches shook, yeah
Ye-ah
Back in high school, I used to bus it to the dance (yeah)
Now I hit the FBO with duffles in my hands
I did half a Xan, thirteen hours 'til I land
Had me out like a light, ayy, yeah
Like a light, ayy, yeah
Like a light, ayy
Slept through the flight, ayy
Knocked for the night, ayy, 767, man
This shit got double bedroom, man
I still got scores to settle, man
I crept down the block (down the block), made a right (yeah, right)
Cut the lights (yeah, what?), paid the price (yeah)
Niggas think it's sweet (nah, nah), it's on sight (yeah, what?)
Nothin' nice (yeah), baguettes in my ice (aww, man)
Jesus Christ (yeah), checks over stripes (yeah)
That's what I like (yeah), that's what we like (yeah)
Lost my respect, you not a threat
When I shoot my shot, that shit wetty like I'm Sheck (bitch!)
See the shots that I took (ayy), wet like I'm Book (ayy)
Wet like I'm Lizzie, I be spinnin' Valley
Circle blocks 'til I'm dizzy (yeah, what?)
Like where is he? (Yeah, what?)
No one seen him (yeah, yeah)
I'm tryna clean 'em (yeah)
She's in love with who I am
Back in high school, I used to bus it to the dance
Now I hit the FBO with duffles in my hand (woo!)
I did half a Xan, thirteen hours 'til I land
Had me out like a light, like a light
Like a light, like a light
Like a light (yeah), like a light
Like a light
Yeah, passed the dawgs a celly
Sendin' texts, ain't sendin' kites, yeah
He said, "Keep that on lock"
I said, "You know this shit, it's stife", yeah
It's absolute (yeah), I'm back reboot (it's lit!)
LaFerrari to Jamba Juice, yeah (skrrt, skrrt)
We back on the road, they jumpin' off, no parachute, yeah
Shawty in the back
She said she workin' on her glutes, yeah (oh my God)
Ain't by the book, yeah
This how it look, yeah
'Bout a check, yeah
Just check the foots, yeah
Pass this to my daughter, I'ma show her what it took (yeah)
Baby mama cover Forbes, got these other bitches shook, yeah
Ye-ah
kill_president
Junior Member
Hello everybody, this is my first post after so many years registed account on vozforums.
Today is 28, July, 2023. I started a day with a shot of milk coffee with 12 thousands Vietnam Dong. In Ho Chi Minh City it so cheap. I am starting learn English again for my new job. That coffee is low price but it makes me have passion to learn English. I have read this post and go to write somthing, maybe incorrect about grammary, vocobulary ... etc but I hope it will mark a new depart for my future. Hope people read this post feel too!
Today is 28, July, 2023. I started a day with a shot of milk coffee with 12 thousands Vietnam Dong. In Ho Chi Minh City it so cheap. I am starting learn English again for my new job. That coffee is low price but it makes me have passion to learn English. I have read this post and go to write somthing, maybe incorrect about grammary, vocobulary ... etc but I hope it will mark a new depart for my future. Hope people read this post feel too!
Lambdadelta Umineko
Senior Member
This post of yours contains too many mistakes:
registed ===> registered
Today is 28, July, 2023 ===> July 2023
12 thousands ===> thousand (The word "thousands" is used only for estimation, without a specific count preceding it.)
it so cheap ===> it is so cheap
I am starting learn English ===> I am starting to learn English
somthing ===> something
maybe incorrect about grammary, vocobulary ... ===> Grammar, vocabulary, etc., may be incorrect... (You spelled the word 'vocabulary' incorrectly, anh there is no word 'grammary' in the English dictionary.)
I hope it will mark a new depart ===> departure
I just checked it briefly and there are already so many mistakes like this, to put it in Vietnamese terms, it's 'blindness'. I hope you will write your paragraph more carefully next time.
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kill_president
Junior Member
Thank you for indicating my mistakes, that help me so much. Long time not ussually using english in lifetime or working so it's not easy for me. I will try my best in the next time to improve my English.This post of yours contains too many mistakes:
registed ===> registered
Today is 28, July, 2023 ===> July 2023
12 thousands ===> thousand (The word "thousands" is used only for estimation, without a specific count preceding it.)
it so cheap ===> it is so cheap
I am starting learn English ===> I am starting to learn English
somthing ===> something
maybe incorrect about grammary, vocobulary ... ===> Grammar, vocabulary, etc., may be incorrect... (You spelled the word 'vocabulary' incorrectly, anh there is no word 'grammary' in the English dictionary.)
I hope it will mark a new depart ===> departure
I just checked it briefly and there are already so many mistakes like this, to put it in Vietnamese terms, it's 'blindness'. I hope you will write your paragraph more carefully next time.
Now is 11:33 AM, 28, July 2023, time to lunch, bon appetit!
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Lambdadelta Umineko
Senior Member
This easy ===> This essay
the main causes of people have low-quality diets ===> the main causes of people having low-quality diets
The two main causes of low-quality diets are people lack of time for take care theirself and easy to buy fast food (Your sentence contains too many grammar errors) ===> The two main causes of low-quality diets are people's lack of time to take care of themselves and their ease to buy fast food
When people stuck with pressed tasks during working time, they tend to use fast-food as a way come back to their works quickly ===> When people are stuck with pressed tasks during working time, they tend to use fast-food as a way to come back to their work quickly
When fast-food restaurants have appeared almost living places such as building, school, shopping mall… ===> such as buildings, schools, and shopping malls…
For example, massive fast-food restaurants can see in almost building, only go down and buy it easy. ===> only go down and buy it easily.
Some possible solutions to this problem are promoting people spend more time to theirself and restricting open fast-food restaurants ===> Some possible solutions to this problem are promoting people to spend more time to themselves
Moreover, Government need to upgrade policies in opening fast-food restaurants, cut down non-standard foods what contain big affections to health people ===> Moreover, Government needs to upgrade policies in opening fast-food restaurants and cut down on non-standard foods that contain big affections on the health of people
This way, people will have less choices when they would like to eat fast-food. ===> This way, people will have fewer choices when they would like to eat fast food.
To conclude, fast-food restaurants turn on common that lead to be people eat more low-quality diets. ===> To conclude, fast-food restaurants turn on common which leads to people eating more low-quality diets.
However, Government can significantly lessen low-quality diets by promoting people spending more time to theirself and restricting open fast-food restaurants. ===> However, Government can significantly lessen low-quality diets by promoting people to spend more time on themselves and restricting open fast-food restaurants.
P/S: Please take more care with your paragraph
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Lambdadelta Umineko
Senior Member
Reducing thousands of fishing vessels to avoid the depletion of aquatic resources.
The Ministry of Agriculture and Rural Development has proposed a reduction in the number of fishing vessels at sea from the current 86,800 to 83,600 in the next 7 years.
The draft Plan for the Protection and Exploitation of Aquatic Resources for the period 2021-2030, with a vision to 2050, is currently being reviewed before being submitted to the Prime Minister.
According to the proposal, the drafting agency suggests a nationwide reduction of 3,200 fishing vessels at sea by 2030. Out of the total of 83,600 vessels, the majority are boats measuring 6-12 meters in length, accounting for 39,000 boats; boats measuring 12-15 meters in length amount to over 17,000 boats; boats measuring 15-24 meters in length make up 24,500 boats, while the remaining are boats longer than 24 meters.
The Central coastal region (from Quang Tri to Binh Thuan) has the highest number of fishing vessels with 33,100 boats; the Gulf of Tonkin (from Quang Ninh to Quang Binh) has 23,800 boats; the Southeast region (from Ba Ria-Vung Tau to Bac Lieu) has 13,000 boats; and the Southwest region (Kien Giang) has 13,600 boats.
By 2030, it is expected that provinces and cities will reduce the total number of fishing vessels by at least 12% compared to 2020.
The number of fishing vessels nationwide has been decreasing over the past 10 years. In 2010, there were 128,400 fishing vessels in the country, and after 12 years, this number has decreased by 41,600. The number of large-capacity vessels (for offshore fishing) has increased. Currently, Vietnam has a fleet of 32,400 offshore fishing vessels, surpassing the set target.
Meanwhile, the Ministry of Agriculture and Rural Development has proposed banning the use of destructive fishing gear that poses a high risk to immature fish stocks. Fishing gear with low selectivity and that obstructs the migration and reproduction of endangered, valuable, and rare aquatic species will also be prohibited.
In addition to reducing the number of fishing vessels, the number of direct laborers involved in fisheries is expected to decrease from the current 730,000 to 600,000 by 2030.
This policy aims to transform Vietnam into a country with sustainable and modern fisheries, ensuring social welfare and maintaining national independence and sovereignty.
In recent years, Vietnam's fisheries sector has experienced continuous growth. Over a span of 12 years (2010-2022), the total volume of exploited aquatic products has steadily increased from 2.4 million to 3.86 million tons. In 2022, the total production of aquatic products reached over 9 million tons, with 3.86 million tons from fishing and 5.19 million tons from aquaculture. The export turnover amounted to 11 billion USD.
However, the editorial agency assesses that Vietnam's offshore fisheries production has exceeded the sustainable threshold. The main reason is excessive exploitation and poor control.
The majority of fishing vessels operate near the coast using destructive fishing gear, depleting the seafood resources. As a result, the seafood reserves in Vietnam's coastal areas have been continuously declining. In the 2000s, the national seafood reserves were about 5 million tons; ten years later, it decreased to 4.3 million tons. By 2019, the seafood reserves were only 3.95 million tons, with the majority being small pelagic fish.
In June, Minister of Agriculture and Rural Development, Le Minh Hoan, stated the policy of reducing fishing vessels to establish strong fishing cooperatives at sea. The ministry is calculating the support needed for fishermen to build larger, modernized vessels for offshore fishing. Vietnam will develop powerful fishing fleets equipped with modern exploitation and processing technologies.
Source: https://vnexpress.net/giam-hang-nghin-tau-ca-de-tranh-tan-diet-nguon-thuy-san-4633272.html
P/S: Another day, I spend 30 minutes translating a Vietnamese article into English.
JordanPham
Senior Member
--- Day 35
--- Vital
Write about the following topic. There is no doubt that globalization has benefited the world by bringing together people, businesses and nations. People who criticize it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
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Nowadays, globalization is an irreversible trend all over the world. There are many different advocates who support this phenomenon and argue with those who are against it. These people say that anti-globalism is preventing the globe from being more thriving. In my opinion, they have their own logical reasons to state that.
First things first, we need to admit that globalization is a good thing in modern societies. With the help of high-speed internet, globalization eases many barriers of the physical borders, which in turn brings goods and products from a manufacturer to places where in shortage. For example, a high-quality car in the United States can be sent to a customer far away on the other side of the Pacific Ocean where the industrial development is limited, just by the globalized joint agreements between countries. Moreover, the flat world and globalization are playing an essential role in eliminating unfairness so that it could create a wide variety of employment opportunities in emerging countries. For instance, a graphic designer in Vietnam can apply for and get a high-paid job in developed countries thanks to sharing cultural knowledge and exchanges with the foundation of globalization.
On the other hand, there are many thoughtful things we should consider when we globalize to eliminate drawbacks. It can be easily seen that creative products should be protected. In China, there are many companies that focus on copying intellectual assets, making alike things and selling at lower prices. In a world where everyone is closer and information is easy to spread than ever, international laws and enforcement should be done strictly to help the pioneers. Another downside that should be taken into account is job security. Governments may have some policies so that companies need to prioritize local employees. Without this protection, the labor market could be damaged by globalization and alien workers.
In conclusion, it can not be denied that globalization is very important and we should promote that rather than criticize it. Nevertheless, I always think that we should take some appropriate measures to help this trend develop in the right way.
--- Vital
Write about the following topic. There is no doubt that globalization has benefited the world by bringing together people, businesses and nations. People who criticize it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
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Nowadays, globalization is an irreversible trend all over the world. There are many different advocates who support this phenomenon and argue with those who are against it. These people say that anti-globalism is preventing the globe from being more thriving. In my opinion, they have their own logical reasons to state that.
First things first, we need to admit that globalization is a good thing in modern societies. With the help of high-speed internet, globalization eases many barriers of the physical borders, which in turn brings goods and products from a manufacturer to places where in shortage. For example, a high-quality car in the United States can be sent to a customer far away on the other side of the Pacific Ocean where the industrial development is limited, just by the globalized joint agreements between countries. Moreover, the flat world and globalization are playing an essential role in eliminating unfairness so that it could create a wide variety of employment opportunities in emerging countries. For instance, a graphic designer in Vietnam can apply for and get a high-paid job in developed countries thanks to sharing cultural knowledge and exchanges with the foundation of globalization.
On the other hand, there are many thoughtful things we should consider when we globalize to eliminate drawbacks. It can be easily seen that creative products should be protected. In China, there are many companies that focus on copying intellectual assets, making alike things and selling at lower prices. In a world where everyone is closer and information is easy to spread than ever, international laws and enforcement should be done strictly to help the pioneers. Another downside that should be taken into account is job security. Governments may have some policies so that companies need to prioritize local employees. Without this protection, the labor market could be damaged by globalization and alien workers.
In conclusion, it can not be denied that globalization is very important and we should promote that rather than criticize it. Nevertheless, I always think that we should take some appropriate measures to help this trend develop in the right way.
Lambdadelta Umineko
Senior Member
that help me so much. ===> that helps me so much.
Long time not ussually using english in lifetime or working so it's not easy for me ===> not usually used English in my lifetime.
I will try my best in the next time ===> I will try my best the next time
Furthermore, your writing is too messy. If it were me, I would rewrite it like this:
"Thank you so much for pointing out my mistakes, I really appreciate it. It isn't easy for me since I haven't usually used English during my lifetime or at work. Next time, I'll do my best to improve my English.
It is 11:33 AM on 28 July 2023, time for lunch, bon appetit!"
P/S: I apologize for being so strict, it's just that as a former English language student, I find sentences like that quite uncomfortable.
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kill_president
Junior Member
29 July 2023
Today is Saturday, I have to go to the office in the morning. It's like a normal day except the traffic is quiet convenient so I feel very comfortable. I arrived at office at quarter to eight and became the person who came to the office earliest. I bought a cup of coffee and enjoy a new day.
Today, my boss will not come to work so I can do anything I like.
Today is Saturday, I have to go to the office in the morning. It's like a normal day except the traffic is quiet convenient so I feel very comfortable. I arrived at office at quarter to eight and became the person who came to the office earliest. I bought a cup of coffee and enjoy a new day.
Today, my boss will not come to work so I can do anything I like.
Thanks for helping!
Lambdadelta Umineko
Senior Member
quiet convenient ===> quite convenient
I arrived at office ===> I arrived at the office
Besides those mistakes, overall you have made a lot of progress compared to yesterday. Keep up the good work
kill_president
Junior Member
Hello everyone, have a nice day!
Today is the start of a new week but the end of an old month. On last saturday night I had a party with my colleague. I drank too many so much so that I got drunk when I didn't know. When I got up, I was be headache and thirst until night. I didn't do anything on Sunday except lay in bed like a doge, that wasted my day. Therefore, I promise myself that today I will not drink beer anymore. I promise, I promise!
Today is the start of a new week but the end of an old month. On last saturday night I had a party with my colleague. I drank too many so much so that I got drunk when I didn't know. When I got up, I was be headache and thirst until night. I didn't do anything on Sunday except lay in bed like a doge, that wasted my day. Therefore, I promise myself that today I will not drink beer anymore. I promise, I promise!
Lambdadelta Umineko
Senior Member
On last saturday night ===> Last Saturday night (When there is an adjective in front of the day of the week, you do not use the preposition on. Therefore, you should say “Last Saturday”.)
I was be headache and thirst until night ===> Until late at night, I had headaches and thirst (This sentence is completely wrong, why is there 'was' and 'be' next to each other?)
I didn't do anything on Sunday except lay in bed like a doge, that wasted my day. ===> Rather than doing anything on Sunday, I just laid in bed like a doge (This sentence is quite vague, it needs to be written more clearly.)
