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Some people believe that students in schools learn better when they study in groups. Other people say that students learn better when they study on their own. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
One school of thought holds that Studying in small-scale groups is the best way to study, whereas others believe that lonely self-study is a better option. This essay attempts to shed light on both perspectives (cụ thể ra, why studying in group is beneficial, namely concentration and essential skills )before concluding that I am favor of the latter.
On the one hand, studying in small groups is beneficial in some ways. Firstly criticism and defense are essential skills for their future careers . This is because of the fact that nowadays, a myriad of big companies, namely Google or Facebook, require candidates to have to express their inner thoughts and feelings, so that studying in a group are more likely to successfully apply in these companies. Knowledge aside, students often have to spend a large amount of time and effort to resolve the tough problems in their exercises. In fact, when students studing in their own heavily expose a difficult issues, they are bored and are easily distracted by interesting things on the Internet like Video games or movie, which could be caused by lower academic results. concentration
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Hoặc câu topic sentence của mỗi body nó phải có cái ntn :
Studying alone regularly can provide two positive outcomes: concentration and essential skills
Ví dụ bài này, thầy em bảo rằng, ở mở bài nên có 1 cái brief summary, ví dụ ở body 1 mình có 2 factors chính là essential skills and concentration, mình nên tóm tắt ở đoạn mở bài để người đọc hiểu qua, vì khi đọc cái mở bài của em ,người chấm chả biết em sẽ viết cái gì. Việc mention 2 cái key points ở mở bài sẽ giúp ng đọc tò mò => thằng này sẽ viết cái gì
One school of thought holds that Studying in small-scale groups is the best way to study, whereas others believe that lonely self-study is a better option. This essay attempts to shed light on both perspectives (cụ thể ra, why studying in group is beneficial, namely concentration and essential skills )before concluding that I am favor of the latter.
On the one hand, studying in small groups is beneficial in some ways. Firstly criticism and defense are essential skills for their future careers . This is because of the fact that nowadays, a myriad of big companies, namely Google or Facebook, require candidates to have to express their inner thoughts and feelings, so that studying in a group are more likely to successfully apply in these companies. Knowledge aside, students often have to spend a large amount of time and effort to resolve the tough problems in their exercises. In fact, when students studing in their own heavily expose a difficult issues, they are bored and are easily distracted by interesting things on the Internet like Video games or movie, which could be caused by lower academic results. concentration
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Hoặc câu topic sentence của mỗi body nó phải có cái ntn :
Studying alone regularly can provide two positive outcomes: concentration and essential skills
Ví dụ bài này, thầy em bảo rằng, ở mở bài nên có 1 cái brief summary, ví dụ ở body 1 mình có 2 factors chính là essential skills and concentration, mình nên tóm tắt ở đoạn mở bài để người đọc hiểu qua, vì khi đọc cái mở bài của em ,người chấm chả biết em sẽ viết cái gì. Việc mention 2 cái key points ở mở bài sẽ giúp ng đọc tò mò => thằng này sẽ viết cái gì
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