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Day 1:
My version:
Today is the third day that i have unemployment. Before leaving my last jobs, I had already made a plan to dertermine what I have to do during the vacancy time and when i had to get a job. As per that plan, I have already get almost my goal. Howerver, I didn't think that I have not gotten a job too long like that. I've applied to more than 12 factories and got 5 interviews but all were failures

To be honest, I'm realy depressed, but I'm trying to tell to myself that the jobs will come soon this hard time will also pass.
I'm still using my time to gain more my knowledge, for examble, I study "Lean & Sixsigma" level Green belt on weekend and Ielt on three days of week.

I hope that I will get a jobs soon and that everythings can be returned like the previous time.

Chat GPT revised for me:
Today marks the third month of my unemployment. I had made a plan before leaving my last job, outlining what I needed to do during this period and when I aimed to secure my next job.

I have achieved almost all of my goals, but I did not anticipate being unemployed for this long. Despite applying to over 12 factories and attending 5 interviews, I have not yet secured a jobs.

To be frank, I'm feeling quite depressed, but I am trying to remain positive and remain myself that this difficult period will eventually pass. In the meantime, I am using my time to enhance my skills and knowledge. For example, I'm studying "Lean & Sixsigma" at Green belt level on weekends and Ielts on the week.

I'm hopeful that I will find a jobs soon and return to the way things were before.

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Day 1:

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Day2:
My version:
To day is a long day again. When you are unemployed, you feel like everythings gose by slowly. I woke up so late, at 09:00 am. After that, I still tried to lie in bed to check FB, read news on F33 and also wait for interview phone from recruimenter.

But, I have already pushed myself to study about grammar for Ielt. I explored a chanel very useful for self-study on youtube called "Học ngữ pháp thực dụng". This chanel shares all the doccuments for their course, which is, of course, its free. All of my feelings rose up on this moment I experienced. Then I studied on continuosly for 3 hours to complete one part of grammar is "All about the noun".

In tonight. I had an Ielts online course. I have already completed it as normal. Oh, One more thing, I have applied for more 5 factory today.

Today has ended. Hopefully that everythings will better on tomorrow.

Chat GPT revised for me:
Today has been another long day. Being unemployed can make time feel like it's moving slowly.

I woke up late at 9:00 am and spent somtime in bed browsing FB and reading news on F33, while also wating for a call from a recruiter for an interview.

However, I decided to push myself to study grammar for Ielts. I found a very useful youtube channel called "Học ngữ pháp thực dụng" for self-study. This channel provides free course documents, which made me fell excited and ,otivated. I spent 3 hours studying one section of grammar, which was "All about the noun".

Tonight, I had an Ielt online course, which I completed as usual. Additionally, I applied to 5 more factories today.

The day has ended, and I hope that tomorrow will be bette.
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Compare with chat GPT, my version fewer about conjunctions and have a little bit in term of tense using. Tomorrow I will try to use more conjunctions in the graph first. Then I try to use more vocab. Ielt 10.0 is comming to me.

--- Day 13
--- Victory

1. The following writing will not be structured. No arguments, examples, or facts are given. Relax and write.

2. David has always played the heroes. Now he is back in Berlin. He wants to save the Wall of Berlin. He once helped to destroy it, but now he wants to save it for historical reasons. There was a developer who wanted to build luxury flats there. Local residents did not want to demolish this iconic wall so the demolitions would be stopped for some time.

3. The day of Saint Patrick is a tradition of the Irish. This year, the celebrations were global. People from around the world came together and celebrated the day. Guinness is a brewery company. There were 13 million pints of Guinness drunk in the world in one day. Guinness was offering a free visit to its factory for those who say "Patrick". Streets in the capital of Ireland, Dublin turned green as people of all ages wore the Patrick costumes. An enthusiastic wildlife photographer had caught incredible pictures of snow leopards on his cameras. He followed the footprints of the predator on the snow. Then he hid his cameras in nearby stones. The cameras have captured many unique pictures of the snow leopards that are rare in China. You can check it out on National Geographic channels.

4. Apprenticeships are career education programs, which provide apprentices with detailed and practical information in a certain industry. Today I would like to mention the Apprenticeship Operating Engineering. This program consists of four optional fields, which are heavy equipment operators, heavy-duty repair, inspection, and the rock products industry. In these apprenticeships, you are going to work with cranes, pile drivers, trucks, drills, millwrights, and other special tools. These kinds of work require high concentration, skills, knowledge, and expertise. The daily job could be to check reinforced concrete, post-tension concrete, soils, cement, rocks, structural steel, and other materials.

đúng với tiếng Anh muốn tien bộ thì mình phải thường xuyên sử dụng ấy ạ. cảm ơn bạn đã chia sẻ

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Day2:

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Day 3. Yesterday I forgot to follow the rule

Yesterday, I got an invited mail to interview for position Industrial Engineer. I hope that I can catch this opportunity becaue this is also multinational cooperation factory. In addition, I've been jobless for too long, and the job market is likely to have fewer jobs than it had previously.
I don't dare think about what I will be doing if I miss this opportunity. I'm trying by my best.
Until I 've completed the interview, I will reduce the time I spend studying English to spend time focusing on prepare for the interview.

Anyway, I wish the best luck to anyone who reads my test.

--- Day 14
--- Resilient

There are a number of stories I would like to tell you. There is a black bear that weighs nearly 136 kilograms climbs at night in the tree. The tree was in someone's garden. The resident found the animal the next day. He called officials who look after the wildlife in Florida to solve the problem. These specialists use drugs to make that bear fall asleep. The bear fell from the tree and was caught by officials. It was taken to the national forest in Florida and will be free.

The next story is about a solar plane that flew over San Fransico. The surface of the plane is covered by solar panels that create electricity. The plane weighs only 1588 kilograms. Its wings measure 65 meters. The maximum speed is about 69 kilometers per hour. This is the first flight of this plane before traveling to New York. A flight around the globe is planned for 2015.

Unemployment and poor educational public school are some of the big problems across the world. In Chile, many people protest about their educational situation. Students say that they received some money but it is not enough for their tuition. Educational reforms are the main political problem in Chile. They complain about a poor educational public school system, expensive private universities, and unprepared teachers. In Spain, there are over 1000 demonstrators in Madrid. They protest because the unemployment rate is about 25 percent, which is a record in history. They say the reforms and high taxes make them angrier. In the beginning, they started to protest peacefully, but then everything got worse and there are some fights between people and policemen. This situation will continue until their situation gets better.

The Cosmetology Apprenticeship Program at Santiago Canyon College provides a wide range of courses and awards. It includes haircutting, coloring, skin care application, facials, makeup, manicures, pedicures, and other courses. The apprentices will be taught by a professional licensee through a variety of forms such as on-the-job training, classroom instruction, and related, supplemental courses. This training prepares apprentices with a good foundation in aesthetics, trends, and the beauty industry. To be accomplished, the apprentices should take a professional licensure exam. You need to demonstrate your skills, ability, proficiency, and knowledge in this fashional field. Completion of this program will make you a proficient cosmetologist, receive a license from California State, get a certificate of achievement, and be eligible for further degrees. So please get in touch with staff if you are interested in this beauty industry.

Phus HN đã nói:

Day 1:
My version:
Today is the third day that i have unemployment. Before leaving my last jobs, I had already made a plan to dertermine what I have to do during the vacancy time and when i had to get a job. As per that plan, I have already get almost my goal. Howerver, I didn't think that I have not gotten a job too long like that. I've applied to more than 12 factories and got 5 interviews but all were failures

To be honest, I'm realy depressed, but I'm trying to tell to myself that the jobs will come soon this hard time will also pass.
I'm still using my time to gain more my knowledge, for examble, I study "Lean & Sixsigma" level Green belt on weekend and Ielt on three days of week.

I hope that I will get a jobs soon and that everythings can be returned like the previous time.

Chat GPT revised for me:
Today marks the third month of my unemployment. I had made a plan before leaving my last job, outlining what I needed to do during this period and when I aimed to secure my next job.

I have achieved almost all of my goals, but I did not anticipate being unemployed for this long. Despite applying to over 12 factories and attending 5 interviews, I have not yet secured a jobs.

To be frank, I'm feeling quite depressed, but I am trying to remain positive and remain myself that this difficult period will eventually pass. In the meantime, I am using my time to enhance my skills and knowledge. For example, I'm studying "Lean & Sixsigma" at Green belt level on weekends and Ielts on the week.

I'm hopeful that I will find a jobs soon and return to the way things were before.

Nhấp để mở rộng...

cho e hỏi chút: sử dụng chatgpt sửa lỗi cho mình như nào ạ?

anhtua4cvp đã nói:

cho e hỏi chút: sử dụng chatgpt sửa lỗi cho mình như nào ạ?

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Gọi chát GPT chứ nó chắc cũng kiểu fake thôi. Bạn vào poe. com rồi đăng kí (Free nha) trong đó có tận mấy con AI. Vào đấy chọn vào "chat GPT" xong rồi cứ bảo nó sửa hay làm gì dó như bình thường thôi.

Phus HN đã nói:

Gọi chát GPT chứ nó chắc cũng kiểu fake thôi. Bạn vào poe. com rồi đăng kí (Free nha) trong đó có tận mấy con AI. Vào đấy chọn vào "chat GPT" xong rồi cứ bảo nó sửa hay làm gì dó như bình thường thôi.

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thanks bác, chắc gia nhập hội tập viết vậy, đợt này đi xin việc mà nhiều việc yêu cầu tiếng anh quá.

Mình thì ko học viết kiểu này
Mà áp dụng vào công việc luôn, vừa học , vừa làm
Ví dụ: học viết thì tập viết email luôn, học đi đôi với hành

Chứ viết mấy cái kiểu kia thì học xong cũng quên hết

I am Tu Nguyen Van. I am now 30 years old and living in Hanoi City.
I graduated from the Academy of Finance in 2015 a major in Auditing.
After that, I worked as a Procedure Specialist at Cenland JSC from 2017 to 2018.
Next, I worked as a Procedure Control at Vinhomes JSC from 2019 to 2020.
Finally, I am currently working as a assistant to the CEO and Internal Control at AHS Property JSC since 2021.
My strength lies in logical thinking and risk control.
I enjoy reading books and conducting research on various subject such as history, science and literature.
I enjoy watching TV and participating in various sports such as football, tennis and e-sports.

DeutschlandGreatAgain đã nói:

Mình thì ko học viết kiểu này
Mà áp dụng vào công việc luôn, vừa học , vừa làm
Ví dụ: học viết thì tập viết email luôn, học đi đôi với hành

Chứ viết mấy cái kiểu kia thì học xong cũng quên hết

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Mới đầu mình cũng áp dụng cái này. Cải thiện cũng khá là rõ rệt. Cơ mà giờ mình đang thất nghiệp với lại không phải lúc nào cũng cần mail t.anh nên cũng hơi tốn thời gian để thành thạo.

Phus HN đã nói:

Mới đầu mình cũng áp dụng cái này. Cải thiện cũng khá là rõ rệt. Cơ mà giờ mình đang thất nghiệp với lại không phải lúc nào cũng cần mail t.anh nên cũng hơi tốn thời gian để thành thạo.

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ok fen , vậy giờ tập viết CV thôi, chúc fen sớm tìm được việc

Gợi ý cho fen: đọc kĩ JD, học thêm cơ bản về các kĩ năng theo JD, updated CV theo hướng JD , khả năng sẽ cao hơn

mình đang tập viết nhạc bằng tiếng anh gửi mọi ngườii chữa dùm
She's in love with who I am
Back in high school, I used to bus it to the dance (yeah)
Now I hit the FBO with duffles in my hands
I did half a Xan, thirteen hours 'til I land
Had me out like a light, ayy, yeah
Like a light, ayy, yeah
Like a light, ayy
Slept through the flight, ayy
Knocked for the night, ayy, 767, man
This shit got double bedroom, man
I still got scores to settle, man
I crept down the block (down the block), made a right (yeah, right)
Cut the lights (yeah, what?), paid the price (yeah)
Niggas think it's sweet (nah, nah), it's on sight (yeah, what?)
Nothin' nice (yeah), baguettes in my ice (aww, man)
Jesus Christ (yeah), checks over stripes (yeah)
That's what I like (yeah), that's what we like (yeah)
Lost my respect, you not a threat
When I shoot my shot, that shit wetty like I'm Sheck (bitch!)
See the shots that I took (ayy), wet like I'm Book (ayy)
Wet like I'm Lizzie, I be spinnin' Valley
Circle blocks 'til I'm dizzy (yeah, what?)
Like where is he? (Yeah, what?)
No one seen him (yeah, yeah)
I'm tryna clean 'em (yeah)
She's in love with who I am
Back in high school, I used to bus it to the dance
Now I hit the FBO with duffles in my hand (woo!)
I did half a Xan, thirteen hours 'til I land
Had me out like a light, like a light
Like a light, like a light
Like a light (yeah), like a light
Like a light

Day 2:
Should I become a stockbroker?
I am working at a real estate company, but I dont think I am fit for this job!
I want to work in a finance company or finance-related job. My goal is to become a CFO within the next 10 years.
I believe this profession offers more opportunities in the future!
The economy can experience growth or recession but this profession remains stable, and many companies continue to recruit.
Can someone can give me a recommendation or suggestion?

--- Day 15
--- Abundant

Have you ever wondered why we need sleep? Why can't we just stay up all night long reading stories? There is an interesting fact that on average, people spend 25 years in their beds, including 3 years of dreaming. So now I want to tell a quick look at sleep. We, humans, need sleep to have a good day. If we don't, we are likely to be tired, confused, and in some extreme cases, we will see things that aren't really there. Getting enough sleep helps our bodies grow, repair themselves, and recharge for the next day. When we sleep, our brains remain active, but in a different way compared to when we are awake. Scientists study this matter of how people behave while sleeping using special machines and measuring brain waves. I am back on this interesting topic in the following writings.

Munich hosted a surfing championship. Is it strange for you? There was a surfing competition. Surfers from all over European countries participated in this event. They performed and showed all kinds of techniques and tricks on the world's largest artificial waves in Munich. This event is a highlight. The top prize is 10000 Euros. There was another competition related to water. If you are interested in the boat race at Cambridge University, you might be excited about the dragon-boat race in China. Teams from across the country came to the southern province of China. There were 17 teams representing their provinces. They took part in a race with their dragon boats. If you have never been trained, there is a big chance that you can not move these boats. But once you have practiced some techniques, it is easier for you to ride this boat. This is a really interesting competition. You can check it out when you are in China.

Geography Department is one of many units at Santiago Canyon College. The faculty and staff there are really enthusiastic. In this department, there are many programs and courses offered to students who are engaged with geographic issues. It could be Economic Geography, Physical Geography, Human and Cultural Geography, Spatial Geography, California Geography, and so on. There is a wide range of courses and programs in this sector, such as Geographic Information Systems, the Concept, and Principles of Map-Making, Climate and Weather Studies, Human and Environment Interface, Global Patterns of Population, and a certain region's landforms, natural vegetation, cultural landscapes, soils, water resources. Completion of these programs could lead to a four-year institution in California state for the baccalaureate. The career outlook could vary, from local, state, and federal sectors to private organizations. I can name some, such as surveyors, national park rangers, land use analysts, waste management specialists, travel and tourism planners, real estate consultants, and urban planning analysts.

I’m a nobody, with no time to notice the brightness of the sun.
My parents couldn’t help me, and I wasn’t highly educated. I had no choice but to make it on my own in the city.
I’d applied to many jobs, but no one ever hired me. Maybe it’s because I’m not good at expressing myself, and I’m not the best communicator. I guess I just haven’t shown enough ability.
Once, I’d eaten two loaves of bread over a three-day period. Hunger kept me up at night. At least I paid a month’s rent in advance, so I didn’t have to face the cold winter wind outside.