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--- Day 27
--- Dynamic

The process of making bottled orange juice is a complex process that goes through many steps. First of all, fresh oranges will be delivered to factories from farms. These oranges are then washed with fresh water and extracted into two parts, waste solid and fresh juice. The waste products are going to be used as animal feed. The main part of fresh juice continues to further process. There is a small amount of the product that will be packed and sold to the market as ready-to-drink juice products. The remaining juice will undergo thorough and comprehensive steps. There are many trucks with refrigerators that will transport the liquid juice to the evaporation machines to eliminate water and create the concentrated one. The concentrated products will be then delivered to warehouses for reservation purposes. Depending on the market demands, then the concentrated juice will be added more water to a suitable concentration and sold to the market.

day 6. What i Cyccle time .Conclusion

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--- Day 03
--- 456 words counted

It was a long working day. I have read many topics in the English language. I would like to share this with you guys.

The first one is about the Education First organization. It is helpful for those who want to learn English and study abroad. They are a multinational company. They have many language courses as well as visa counseling services. I have read an annual report of EF.

This report is the so-called EF English Proficiency Index which indicates the ability of countries and regions around the world. An exam should be done by test takers for 50 minutes. This exam is EF SET which stands for Standard English Test. It includes a 25-minute reading test and a 25-minute listening test. There were about roughly 2.1 million test takers. The sampling size is big enough to make this index a valuable source for evaluating the English ability of a certain country or region.

As you can guess, the European region is far much better in terms of English proficiency level than any other region across the globe. The Netherlands, Sweden, and Poland are countries on top of the world with very high English proficiency bands. Vietnam is in the moderate band. A surprising fact is that Thailand is in a very low English proficiency band.

There are many conclusions and recommendations for readers who want to improve their English skills. Check it out at the website of Education First, or search on Google with the keywords of EF EPI or EF SET.

Another topic that may be helpful for you. It is all about the educational philosophy. As you may not know, the kindergarten term has just been coined recently. The kindergarten in which children will be taught did not appear until the 18th century. Before that time, children have to work in many places with unpleasant and unhealthy conditions. It was believed that children working will reduce the burden on families. People at that time had no idea about the stages of children's development. Lacking food and poverty are some of the most common reasons for this phenomenon.

Over time, along with a wide range of innovations during the Industrial Revolution in the U.S. and Europe, working performance has increased significantly. Food is produced and packaged in assembly lines in many factories. Cost is reduced. Living conditions have improved dramatically. Children's labor is less likely to be a major source of a number of factories.

There are many thinkers who claimed that children and teenagers should be educated in a more friendly environment. They should learn and play in school. Advocates agree that the educational period will play an important role in modern society.

Thanks for reading. Have a good night!

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--- Day 28
--- Coherent

How would you deal with boredom in your work?

For example, repetition of some daily tasks could make you burn out easily.

In other words, how to keep ourselves interested and excited in professional life?

JordanPham đã nói:

--- Day 28
--- Coherent

How would you deal with boredom in your work?

For example, repetition of some daily tasks could make you burn out easily.

In other words, how to keep ourselves interested and excited in professional life?

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I cannot say for everyone.
But for my job in particular, I always try to automatize the daily tasks as much as I can. Because in my line of work, I only have to do at most 1-2 "daily tasks" and 1-2"monthly tasks". The rest of the time, I can focus on other works or simply relax if I can afford it.
To be truth, my "daily tasks" is different from my daily task, so I rarely get bored of it. Although I have to say the requirements to adapt to all the "not so consistent situation/task" can easily exhaust one's mind. But this strays too far from your question so I'm gonna stop here.

And for your last question, I believe the question may not only apply to the professional life but also can apply to life itself:
"How to keep ourself intertest and excited in life?"
I would simply quote my most recently read book's quote

Life is naught but set of moments, you've got to live each one. All that time spent tending the garden. You forget to sit back in the garden and enjoy it.

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- The Wisdom of Crowds by Joe Abercrombie

--- Day 29
--- Realistic

Welcome back. Today, I would deal with writing task 2. Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socializing online to meeting one another in person. What do you think about this opinion?
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Talking with each other in the technology world is becoming more easier than ever. There are many social media platforms allowing us to keep our friends up-to-date all the time. It is believed that young people are spending too much time online to connect with their friends without interacting directly. In my opinion, I only partially agree with this idea to a certain extent.

As a matter of fact, we need to acknowledge that time a teenager spends surfing online is increasing significantly. Teenagers these days tend to connect and interact with their friends on a variety of social media platforms. In fact, the Internet is one of the greatest inventions in human history. It helps us socialize with our distant friends, no matter where they are, what they are doing, or how their day is. This is especially true for teenagers, who are soon exposed to the technology world. They love connecting with friends via Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram according to many scientific reports.

Besides spending time to message each other online, however, teenagers are also aware that hanging out helps them to get to know their friends more thoroughly. Eating out, participating in parties, and walking down the streets are ways that they like the most. Direct messages could help them to entertain, gossip, and update information, but seeing each other directly is the only way to make the relationships more understandable and worthier. As a result, there are many offline successful restaurants, cafeterias, and playgrounds for young children and teenagers.

In conclusion, I would like to suggest some simple ways to encourage and enhance offline activities. First, we could hold some classes providing social skills tips that help our teenagers to effectively communicate with friends in real-life scenarios. Next, the government should spend an amount of money to renovate public places for children and teenagers. Finally, parents could award their children some small prizes if they join some social clubs or sports activities offline. It will give them more motivation to go out and experience the real world.

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--- Day 30
--- Tasty

Sea level changes
The graph tells us the actual records of sea level changes from 1870 to 2008, as well as the estimates of the past and future. It is predicted that the sea levels will continue to rise. It is estimated that the sea levels will have increased by 200mm by the year 2050. Sea levels are forecasted to grow more rapidly between 2050 and 2100. By 2100, sea levels are estimated to be 500mm higher than present.

Sports among groups
This stacked bar chart is showing the number of interviewees belonging to groups of adults, boys, and girls participating in swimming, hockey, tennis, basketball, and football. It is clear that swimming is the most popular while basketball and football are the least popular when it comes to the total number of participants. On the one hand, girls tend to enjoy playing hockey the most and don't like playing football. On the other hand, adults are likely to join swimming and tennis while refusing to play basketball, football, and hockey. Boys are the only group that participates in a variety of sports in balanced numbers. Based on the above key features and chart, it is sure that football is played by boys and hockey is played by girls in a significant ratio compared to other groups. Swimming and tennis are sports played by groups in balanced numbers.

--- Day 31
--- Colorful

Welcome back to my series. Today, I'm going to start with writing task 1 in the IELTS exam. There is a type of question you need to clarify all of the main similar and different features of visual information, that is contrasting and comparing tasks. Okay, let's get started.

The graph today is a bar chart showing the net worth of the U.K. from 2000 to 2010 according to three different sectors. The figures for UK households remained fairly steady between 2000 and 2002 then began rising continuously from 4500 billion British pounds in 2002 to over 6500 billion British pounds in 2007. Between 2000 and 2007, both household and government wealth showed positive figures that gradually increase over time. While the UK government and household net wealth significantly dropped in 2008, the UK government's figures continued to decrease so much that actually reached negative numbers in 2010.

Between 2000 and 2010, the total wealth of the UK followed similar patterns to that of households and government. Although the wealth of businesses improved during the period of 2000 - 2002, the trend didn't last long and became worsened a year later. From 2005 to 2007, although the rest of the country experience continued growth, the businesses' wealth was reduced and returned to the levels of 2000. The data for the business community revealed the opposite trends between different sectors in the UK. At the same time that the wealth of households and the government were experiencing growth, the business figures decreased.

--- Day 32
--- Aggressive

The diagram explains how recycled paper is made from old newspapers. First, some newspaper is torn into small pieces and put into a bowl. Then, 250 ml of water is added and the paper is left to soak for up to one hour. Next, an electric mixer is used to beat the mixture for about 45 seconds until it forms a pulp. When it is ready, the pulp is poured into a shallow tray and a further 100 ml of water is added. The pulp is mixed by hand. Then a piece of mesh is used to carefully lift the pulp mixture out of the tray, allowing the water to drain. Next, an old newspaper is opened to place the pulp mixture inside. A rolling pin is used to press the paper down and force out any excess water. Finally, your newspaper is left to dry in a warm place for at least 24 hours.

--- Day 33
--- Grateful

Welcome back to my series. Today, we are going to go through the IELTS Task 1 lesson that I am taking. Below are some of the sentences used for introductory and descriptive purposes.

The amount of traffic on the roads continues to increase. The diagram shows the method for making canned food. The number of children who do not have access to a computer at home is higher in Newtown than in Westbridge. The chart shows figures for four different means of transport in the Netherlands. Another significant figure is the percentage of the budget that the school spent on recruiting staff. The chart clearly shows the factors that lead to the current energy problems.

The difference between the two is only 9 percent. This involves a great deal of hard work. The chart shows several of the areas that we tend to take for granted in our lives. In the older groups, there was a dramatic increase in 2000. The graph shows that the attendance rate of women increased far more than that of men. There was a slight decrease from 2005 to 2010, but overall it remained the same. The figures show how many people in the area make use of the local sports centers. We often go on educational trips to museums and art galleries.

The market square, which is right in the center of the town, has not changed in 300 years. According to the 1700s map, there was a house in the bottom right-hand corner. Another feature that has remained the same is the church, located in the center, to the right of the market square. The row of shops that can be seen at the bottom center of both maps, has changed little over the years.

--- Day 34
--- Romantic

Here is an example of writing task 1. Please come along to know how to describe a place during a period of time.

The two maps allow us to see the changes in a small town over a 300-year period. In the 1700s, the town was relatively small and consisted of a few farms and houses gathered around a central marketplace and church. Transport was restricted to horses at that time so the roads were very basic. Having said that, the roads were clearly marked and the river had a bridge running across it.

In the present-day town, a great deal has changed. Perhaps the noticeable changes are those relating to transportation. Our modern-day needs are very different so the roads have been improved and traffic lights, a roundabout, and a zebra crossing have been added, as well as an extra road. Increased traffic means that a car park has replaced Goode farm and the fields located at the top of the 1700s map. Housing is another area where many changes have been made. While in the 1700s there were few houses, now there are rows of houses and a block of flats instead of stables. A further development is the supermarket and the hotel, which have been extended.

HOT TAKE

What's the big deal about leaking exam questions? Will the country become poorer if they are leaked? Diving into the education system of the Ministry of Education and Training in Vietnam will only lead to failure. Students, keep leaking the exam questions!

First of all, let me assert that leaking exam questions will not result in criminal punishment for the students who do it. If I am wrong, I will pay 10 million VND to be divided equally among all commenters in this thread. I support the act of leaking exam questions and causing instability to what is called 'internal political security'. The foundation of this country has never been and will never be knowledge or education, but rather bribery, corruption, setting the people up, and real estate speculation. You may be successful through education, but it is definitely not the education system of Vietnam, not the education system of the Ministry of Education and Training. The education system of Vietnam must perish. I support those who will take the upcoming exams, bring their phones to take pictures, and quickly post them online. Whatever happens in the exams, it doesn't matter, as long as the education system is destroyed. Open your eyes and see the true nature of 'internal political security' on this VOZ forum (someone may say I am a scavenger who collects garbage on the internet, but who cares)
For now, let's look at the students who excel in Nghe An and Ha Tinh, and go abroad to work, build houses, and buy cars after selling their labor. What's wrong with that? Or do you want to ask, "What's the point of building a 5-story house and buying a car?" Is everyone in East Laos a top student? Now, whether you are carrying cement bags, cutting grass, or growing cannabis, it's all the same. Even if you graduate with honors, if you go abroad to work for a month, you can send home 20 million VND, and it doesn't matter if you live in poor working conditions, as long as you have money. On the other hand, working in Vietnam may earn you 10 million VND, but you may also experience power outages and be kicked out onto the streets at any time.
And then there's the threat of "when you go through passport control, when you come back with the shipping invoice," sitting in a refrigerated container, is that a risk? That's just a small chance of danger. The next time you sneak into a cold container, remember to wear warm clothes and stick a heating pad on yourself to make it through the scanner machine. Sending home 1,000 euros a month is no big deal.
Next, you have to train your physical fitness to run away from the police (if you get chased, don't worry, the Japanese and Taiwanese police run very slowly, they are not as agile and nimble as Vietnamese workers unless they use a car or a drone to track you, then it's a matter of luck).
Students come back to receive their degrees, but they only end up working as drivers for ride-hailing services like Be and Grab.
What are they even studying for? Even the vice principal has had to leave the country to work abroad. Perhaps it's time for universities to start tracking which students bring back the most foreign currency for the country after 5 years of graduation, building big houses instead of just tracking which students study in their field or how many of them are excellent.
Xoài Non: "It's better to be a bad student and make a lot of money than to be a good student and not make any money. Nowadays, society only cares about money, do you guys understand?"
Thanh Tâm trứng rán: "I'd rather be a bad student and make money than score 25 or 30 points on a test and not earn a single penny."
Linh Ka: "Grades aren't important, you can buy anything now!"
After throwing stones and making fun of it, they finally hit us in the face with the holy national high school graduation exam, and pretended to be sweet while saying "Everyone cheats, but if we stay honest, we'll end up being disabled."
And now, there won't be any more conduct grades or advanced student rankings.
https://voz.vn/.../bo-xep-loai-hanh-kiem-yeu-la-nhan-van.../
They're even changing the way they calculate grades: they will no longer calculate the overall average grade for each subject, but instead, only calculate the average grade for each subject in the middle and high school (starting from the 2024-2025 school year for grades 9 and 12).
Young people have begun to realize the truth, that grades are not everything.
This is the result of investing in education in Vietnam at this time.
If even a writer's work is only given a score of 3, then what hope is there for the rest of us?
What's the point of studying abroad?
Now I ask you, what's wrong with what Xoài Non and Trứng Rán said? We don't care about the impact on the development of young people. If Xoài Non didn't drop out of school, she would be selling rice paper rolls for her entire life, do you understand?
If it's easy, relaxing, and makes a lot of money, then people will do it. Working in an administrative role with a university degree barely pays 10 million VND.
Meanwhile, those who are good-looking and have a daddy can easily make 15-20 million VND a month without doing anything.
This is a message from a vozer who is a sugar baby.
As for those who want to study properly, keep in mind that a lifetime of education only costs around 5 million VND, working as a translator or interpreter. Remember that FDI invests in Vietnam for cheap labor, meaning manual labor rather than intellectual labor.
By the time you reach your second year of university, no one cares if you were a top student before:
https://www.tiktok.com/@hieucb06/video/6972907128566615297
Now, this is how students spend their break time:
https://www.tiktok.com/@meenu0308/video/7115276304659926298
https://www.tiktok.com/@tkc_pt19/video/7139714254793395482
"Hard work pays off" has become a reality:
https://www.tiktok.com/@_ph.../video/7084439911901842714
https://www.tiktok.com/@vtvcab.../video/7229559807647255809
Keep studying:
https://www.tiktok.com/@ceohigh.../video/7163930564154658049
https://www.tiktok.com/@tongkho.../video/7181677634399620379
Especially in Vietnam, studying math is a must-drop. A society that looks down on knowledge is a society that is improving.

P/S: Dịch thử đống chữ của thằng thớt này.

Day 6:

how to know if articles are exactly grammar or not?

hi every body
how are u today?
I good, I'm leaning english with writing
!!!

The upcoming passage is not written by me. I just simply rewritten/reorganize/reconstruct/summarize it from one of my recently read book. I just want to throw it here since I find it really interesting and somehow kind of related to my recent posts about "the urge to write"

I write these words in the forty-third year of my life. I write them for a purpose of which my old tutor would never have approved; I write them for myself and my own perusal. Even if I wished otherwise, it is unlikely that any eyes save my own shall see them. But I do not wish otherwise. I would not explain myself to the world, and I would not have the world understand me; I have become indifferent to us both. For however long I may live in this body, which I have served with much care and art for so many years, that part of my life which matters is over; thus I may view it with detached interest of the scholar that my tutor once said I might have become.
Yet how strong is the force of old habit! For even now, as I write these first words in this journal, and as I know that they are written to be read only by that strangest of all readers, myself, I find myself pausing in deliberation as I seek the proper topic which to found my argument, the appropriate argument itself, the constitution of the argument, the effective arrangement of its parts, and even the style in which those parts are to be delivered. It is myself whom I would persuade to truth by the force of my discourse, and myself whom I would dissuade. It is a foolishness, yet I believe not a harmful one. It occupies my day at least as fully as does the counting of the waves that break over the sand upon the rocky coast of this island.
Yes, it is likely that my life is over. All has become the object of an indifferent curiosity, and nothing of consequence. Perhaps I write these words and employ the device that I have learned so that I may discover whether I may rouse myself from this great indifference into which I have descended. I doubt that I shall be able to do so, any more than I should be able to push these massive rocks down the slope of the dark concern of the sea. I am indifferent even to my doubt.

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- Augustus, John Edward Williams

hi guys,
I has started learn english at https://discord.gg/enghub
this is good channel