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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the percentage of people from 65 years old upwards in three distinct nations from 1940 to 2040.
It is clear that the proportion of elderly people in three different nations increase. In addition, Japan witness a dramatic increase in the population aged 65 years and over.
In 1940, there were about 9% of elderly people in the USA, the figure for Sweden and Japan was around 7 and 5 percent respectively. Over the next 40 years, the proportion of people from 65 years old upwards in the USA increased by approximately 6%. Likewise, Sweden experienced a significant increase, reaching about 14%. By contrast, the proportion of elderly people in Japan fell by about 2%. From the year 1980 upwards, it can be seen that the proportion of elderly people in Japan surpassed the other two nations, and is expected to reach about 27% in 2040. The figure for the percentage of elderly people in Sweden and Japan rose significantly and is predicted to reach 25% and 23% respectively by the end of the period.
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