AwesomeBoy
Senior Member
Some people argue that diet is the key to good health. Others argue that exercising should be prioritized to achieve a healthy lifestyle. —> I dont know whether I have to compare these
I would side with those who believe that diet plays an important role to/ an important catalyst for good health. This could be attributed to the fact that many people, following dietary guidelines, who could be provided by many vitamins and nutrients for the immune system, which results in avoiding many infectious diseases. An exemple of this matter is Thuy Quynh, is a farmer in Vietnam, who was in the final stage of digestive cancer in 1990. Thanks to this following dietary guidelines, her health status was better than before. Undoubtedly, if patients who are struggling with cancers like Joy still using medicine only in lieu of coordinating with eating dietary, their survival rates would be significantly lower
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I would side with those who believe that diet plays an important role to/ an important catalyst for good health. This could be attributed to the fact that many people, following dietary guidelines, who could be provided by many vitamins and nutrients for the immune system, which results in avoiding many infectious diseases. An exemple of this matter is Thuy Quynh, is a farmer in Vietnam, who was in the final stage of digestive cancer in 1990. Thanks to this following dietary guidelines, her health status was better than before. Undoubtedly, if patients who are struggling with cancers like Joy still using medicine only in lieu of coordinating with eating dietary, their survival rates would be significantly lower
thật sự bài này em thấy gv chấm bảo sai ngữ pháp nhiều quá mà check trên GG nó k ra
