AwesomeBoy
Senior Member
Giiaso viên hướng dẫn viết 1 body như sau :
Idea
technological advancements,
Reasons + Results (any flaws?)
reason:technological advancements,
result: a large number of products are only made for the wealthy
Examples
(General?Specific?)
Discussion
(1)What’s happening?What happened?
(3)Benefits/ problems?
(4)If not?
(5)Other cases?
(1)advancements in space technology have allowed people to travel into space, but such a trip would cost over $200.000.
-problem:This is surely unaffordable for the vast majority of the human population.
Còn đây bài của em, thầy bảo viết chán quá
This could be attributed to the fact that people, working to kill animal species, could encounter with many poisonous and venomous animals, which leads to render these people detrimental/ fatal ( đoạn which… có thể thay thế thus, these poison and venom could take a toll to their health) . This is evidenced by Nam, a well-known scientific poacher in Vietnam, who has a mission to kill the green snake, which is the most venomous species living in Nam Phuong’s forest, was bitten by this snake. Eventually, he died when he since his blood absorbed the venom of this snake. Undoubtedly, if the poacher like Nam did not do this mission instead of facing this poisonous and venomous animals, he would not die because of venom
Idea
technological advancements,
Reasons + Results (any flaws?)
reason:technological advancements,
result: a large number of products are only made for the wealthy
Examples
(General?Specific?)
| the latest model of an iPhone, which often boasts innovative features and technological advancements, a stylish design, costs shy of $2000, which is possibly equivalent to numerous people’s yearly income. |
Discussion
(1)What’s happening?What happened?
(3)Benefits/ problems?
(4)If not?
(5)Other cases?
(1)advancements in space technology have allowed people to travel into space, but such a trip would cost over $200.000.
-problem:This is surely unaffordable for the vast majority of the human population.
Còn đây bài của em, thầy bảo viết chán quá
This could be attributed to the fact that people, working to kill animal species, could encounter with many poisonous and venomous animals, which leads to render these people detrimental/ fatal ( đoạn which… có thể thay thế thus, these poison and venom could take a toll to their health) . This is evidenced by Nam, a well-known scientific poacher in Vietnam, who has a mission to kill the green snake, which is the most venomous species living in Nam Phuong’s forest, was bitten by this snake. Eventually, he died when he since his blood absorbed the venom of this snake. Undoubtedly, if the poacher like Nam did not do this mission instead of facing this poisonous and venomous animals, he would not die because of venom
