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milet_ said:
#6
One more about the very hot young star on the transfer market, it is Erling Haaland. What’s good about him? Along with Mbappe, the two are the biggest young star right now, who are expected to replace Messi and Ronaldo in the near future. What make him so hot on the transfer market? First, he is very young, at 21 what he did make the world excited. Second, he can read the opponent defensive line well then makes them confuse to have an open space. Finally, his great acceleration and speed along with his precise shooting make him unstoppable. As a result, he did score 27 goals and 6 assists in 28 games in Bundesliga. What a great player!
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Correct some mistake, hope it help.
 
pgho33 said:
#6
One more thing about the very hot young star on the transfer market, it is Erling Haaland. What’s good about him? Along with Mbappe, these two are the biggest young stars right now, who are expected to replace Messi and Ronaldo in the near future. What makes him so hot on the transfer market? Firstly, is he is very young, at 21 what he did make the world excited shook the world. Secondly, is he can read the opponents’ defensive line well then make them confused in order to have an open space. Finally, is his great acceleration and speed along with his pricise* (precise) shooting make him unstoppable. As a result, he did scored 27 goals and 6 assists in 28 games in Bundesliga. What a great player!

Cái này là sửa giúp bạn grammar, phần viết thì bạn cần tiến bộ viết sao cho có lý. Ví dụ điểm cuối dùng từ “speed” là đủ, vì bạn đang muốn nói về tốc độ của cầu thủ. Chèn thêm “acceleration” là thừa thải.

Bạn giỏi đó, tập viết hàng ngày từ từ văn sẽ ko lủng củng, tương lai nhìn lại sẽ thấy bản thân tiến bộ rất nhiều.
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I think he wanted to emphasize the acceleration đó fency. For example, all racing cars can achieve the speed of 300km/h, but how long does it take to accelerate from 0 to 100km/h? Acceleration is different from speed.
 
milet_ said:
#6
One more about the very hot young star on the transfer market, it is Erling Haaland. What’s good about him? Along with Mbappe, the two are the biggest young star right now, who are expected to replace Messi and Ronaldo in the near future. What make him so hot on the transfer market? First is he very young, at 21 what he did make the world excited. Second is he can read the opponent defensive line well then make them confuse to have an open space. Final is his great acceleration and speed along with his pricise shooting make him unstoppable. As a result, he did scored 27 goals and 6 assists in 28 games in Bundesliga. What a great player!
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#7, one week achievement, now i'm going for two weeks
In the competition of having his signature, there are so many big name we can list like Manchester United, Manchester City, Barcelona, Real Madrid or even PSG. We will go into detail of which club have big chance to have him and suit him the most. We had already known that Manchester United approached him before he is going to Dortmund but for so many reason he choosed Dortmund. The club itself currently has so many options in forward line but it is not the problem for the big name like Haaland if the club want to bring him back. With Ronaldo that even an advantage to attract Haaland because he is Haaland’s idol. Manchester United is in building process so they will need a young star like Haaland for the long-term process and the team is now not so sustainable to go for a title like Premier League and Champions League. This will make him consider so much for his future because he is determined to be great like his idol, Ronaldo.
 
milet_ said:
#7, one week achievement, now i'm going for two weeks
In the competition of having his signature, there are so many big name we can list like Manchester United, Manchester City, Barcelona, Real Madrid or even PSG. We will go into detail of which club have big chance to have him and suit him the most. We had already known that Manchester United approached him before he is going to Dortmund but for so many reason he choosed Dortmund. The club itself currently has so many options in forward line but it is not the problem for the big name like Haaland if the club want to bring him back. With Ronaldo that even an advantage to attract Haaland because he is Haaland’s idol. Manchester United is in building process so they will need a young star like Haaland for the long-term process and the team is now not so sustainable to go for a title like Premier League and Champions League. This will make him consider so much for his future because he is determined to be great like his idol, Ronaldo.
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#8
Next one is Manchester City. After the UCL final, it was clearly that they were lack of a striker. Pep knew that and he try to find one. Coicidentally, Harry Kane had desire to leave Spurs that time. The negotiation was proceeded, but in the end, nothing was completed cause the price Levy proposed was too high. Now they switching their target, a new one, young one and more talent than Harry at his age, Erling Haaland. It was reported that his release clause by €75 million, that is not the problem with Man City or any others big name. They were bid £100m for Jack Grealish this summer. So the problem now is the bonus for his agent Mino Raiola and Man City’s squad depth. As it was said before, with a striker like Haaland, Man City will become unbeatable. Man City has just lost their longwaited UCL title, and they are really want to take it back again, also for Haaland to assert himself as a big player that can replace Messi and Ronaldo. With all that things, Man City certainly becomes the biggest name to sign Haaland.
 
Hello everyone, i am a second-year student. I am going to take a Toeic test in about next 4-5 months. I have test my level on English Score. The result is 5.0 Ielts. Since i passed the graduation exam, i have not used English much. I hope you to point out my error, which can help me to improve my English. Nice to meet you. Thank you!
 
Đại số tuyến tính said:
Hello everyone, i am a second-year student. I am going to take a Toeic test in about next 4-5 months. I have test tested my level on English Score. The result is 5.0 Ielts. Since i passed the graduation exam, i have not used English much. I hope you to point out my error, which can help me to improve my English. Nice to meet you. Thank you!
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Hope to do sth hoặc là hope (that)
 
milet_ said:
#8
Next one is Manchester City. After the UCL final, it was clearly that they were lack of a striker. Pep knew that and he try to find one. Coicidentally, Harry Kane had desire to leave Spurs that time. The negotiation was proceeded, but in the end, nothing was completed cause the price Levy proposed was too high. Now they switching their target, a new one, young one and more talent than Harry at his age, Erling Haaland. It was reported that his release clause by €75 million, that is not the problem with Man City or any others big name. They were bid £100m for Jack Grealish this summer. So the problem now is the bonus for his agent Mino Raiola and Man City’s squad depth. As it was said before, with a striker like Haaland, Man City will become unbeatable. Man City has just lost their longwaited UCL title, and they are really want to take it back again, also for Haaland to assert himself as a big player that can replace Messi and Ronaldo. With all that things, Man City certainly becomes the biggest name to sign Haaland.
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#9
I would like to talk about Real Madrid, Barcelona and PSG simultaneously cause they are not interested in Haaland as these two clubs which I was said before. To start with Barcelona, we all knew that they were in financial crisis, they even had to let Messi go for free. But as some sources said they were invested €1.5 billion by a company in Dubai and Haaland’s signing as the first star to build the new dynasty after Messi resignation. We will continue with Real and PSG, both have a link and it is Mbappe. In the last summer transfer market, Mbappe said he wanted to go to Madrid. So we had some news about PSG’s reservation plan in replacing Mbappe with Haaland. As if happaned, Mbappe stayed in Paris. Same as PSG, Haaland is also a reservation plan for Madrid if they can not sign Mbappe. But more than that, some sources said they wanted both. In my prediction, it is very high chance Mbappe will go to Madrid and the same for Haaland to go to Paris if PSG want to find a new striker to replace him. Finally, the chance of Haaland going to which one of these three clubs are not clearly, we have to waited how PSG and Mbappe deal with other to have a better conclusion.
 
Recently on several state-media run, i realize many Vietnam's netizen interested in Laos high speed railway using technology and capital from China.What do you think about high speed railway in Vietnam ?
 
hoangpilot said:
Recently on several state-media run, i realize many Vietnam's netizen interested in Laos high speed railway using technology and capital from China.What do you think about high speed railway in Vietnam ?
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Vietnam? No hope, mike fency =]]]]]]]]]
Look at Cat Linh - Ha Dong, you'll know the reason.
 
It's almost mid-night now and I don't even want to sleep.
I've just thinking about my future and my passion. In the last four months, I've tried so hard to learn new things. Looking back I've learned a lot but I know that I am still miles away from my dream. The subject which I learn now is the subject I once reject and afraid to try, but I know I have an enormous passion for that.
I know that I am not that young to have a third chance to change my life. I know that if I am lazy, I will never become who I want to be. I know that I have to try harder to achieve my dream. But I do know that I am capable of doing that and I am better day by day. I know that if I keep trying, at the very near future I will achieve my dream.
Try your best and the rest will come!
 
milet_ said:
#9
I would like to talk about Real Madrid, Barcelona and PSG simultaneously cause they are not interested in Haaland as these two clubs which I was said before. To start with Barcelona, we all knew that they were in financial crisis, they even had to let Messi go for free. But as some sources said they were invested €1.5 billion by a company in Dubai and Haaland’s signing as the first star to build the new dynasty after Messi resignation. We will continue with Real and PSG, both have a link and it is Mbappe. In the last summer transfer market, Mbappe said he wanted to go to Madrid. So we had some news about PSG’s reservation plan in replacing Mbappe with Haaland. As if happaned, Mbappe stayed in Paris. Same as PSG, Haaland is also a reservation plan for Madrid if they can not sign Mbappe. But more than that, some sources said they wanted both. In my prediction, it is very high chance Mbappe will go to Madrid and the same for Haaland to go to Paris if PSG want to find a new striker to replace him. Finally, the chance of Haaland going to which one of these three clubs are not clearly, we have to waited how PSG and Mbappe deal with other to have a better conclusion.
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#10
Last weeknd in the 8th round of Premier League, Manchester United vs Leicester City. The match ended by a final score of 4-2 for Leicester in Man Utd home ground. With that result, the dissapointed show clearly on everywhere for Man Utd fans. Pogba and Solskjaer were being criticized the most for the lost. First we will talk about Solskjaer, the manager of the team. From the time he came to United till now, he spent almost £400 million in signings. In the last summer he had Sancho and especially Ronaldo, but nothing was showed the effectivess. What the fans talked mostly about him is he showed nothing in his playstyle. He just let the players play what like what they want and do nothing. Solskjear was also admitted his fault in choosing the starting line-up with Harry Maguire. With this lost, Man Utd now dropping to fifth and losing ground in the title race. Sacked pressure become heavier on Solskjaer.
 

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