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TaylorSwift1989

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Somebody argue that buying physical newspaper werenot bought by anyone. While I accept this perception is somewhat justifiable, I believe that having a pick for traditional newspaper on more crucial considerations rather than online newspapers.

On the one hand, a good number of people tend to choose technical newspaper. Firstly, online newspapers bring a great deal of convenience to users. For instance, with the advanced technology, such as computer and smartphone connected to Internet, which could contribute to reading online news whenever and wherever they want. Secondly, the enormous cost incurred to print physical newspapers would put a strain on government coffers. As a result, this could lead to budget deficits, tax hike, or reduced social welfare, thereby forcing ordinary citizens, especially the underprivileged, to struggle even more to earn a living.

On the other hand, there are a host of compelling reasons why I am convinced that it is crucial for printing newspapers. The first reason is that reading news on the Internet can have a detrimental effect on people’s health. This is because prolonged sitting to read online news by technical gadgets, such as Mobile phones or Laptop, it coulds lead to a wide range of health problems, specifically eye strain and back pain. Another reason is that long exposure to untruth news on the Internet which weren’t censored by people. According to a study by BBC related to teenagers in 2016, around 60% of the teenagers surveyed said that they had violent actions like hitting or fighting others because of long exposure on the violent resources, which might have an undesirable influence on the young who are studying.

In conclusion, while it is irrefutable that choosing a technical newspaper because of convenience and decreasing budget of the government, I would contend that people should be taken into consideration using printed newspapers.
 

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